Hey dev, since you said there will be a harem. For the sake of clarification, how do you define Harem?
Will it be a harem as in "MC simultaneously has multiple (3+) girlfriends/lovers who are cool and contented with sharing him among each other" all the to the very end?
Or will this just be the "MC bangs multiple women and at a later point in the game MC must pick one girl to be with"?
Also i assume on the "Be Loyal" path that Kiara will be the center focus of MC's love life? While "Fuck everything that moves" path will be like an even playing field with the ladies (every lady got a chance) and Kiara will be available also, but not as much as on the "Be Loyal" path, correct?
Kudos to you for having a brown/dark skinned Male MC in your game
and for having one that isn't a walking stereotype or cliche (Not of that raceplay or cuckoldry BS) from what i seen so far. Which all together is rare to see in these erotic visual novel games (and super rare in erotic comics). Also glad the MC isn't (so far) portrayed as a goofball or wisecracking clown.
As other mentioned the bartender Ava's face could be tweaked & reworked around some, especially if she'll have a prominent role or screen-time or not if her role is minor. Others like Thalia and Sia model designs look decent.
Anyways, good luck dev to a prosperous game.