Thanks for the nice comment!This man is withouth one of the best at constructing an NTR scenes in a game/AVN, so i have no worries in that regard.
My only worry is that we might be aroaching the NTR limit where the suspension of disbelief breaks and starts to annoy the espectator. Unlike simple cheating that is more pausible, NTRs premise of "corruption by cock" requieres a healthy suspension of disbelief that varies from person to person. With that said, even the most hardent NTR lover finds its breaking point, a moment when things that the antagonist/bull gets away with stop being hot and starts becoming annoying. This limit is more likely to be break the longer the story goes and the more girls join in.
Now im not saying that we're at that point (given how hot i have found recent developements with Mary) but i fear im personally getting close to it and i think that is because of two factors:
-i dont know how much longer i can stand Satoshi feinging ignorance or nobody calling out Kendo for his predatory actions.
-I feel that Naomi is one girl too many. Dont get me wrong i love Naomi's desing and i would like nothing more than seing her down and dirty but at same time im not thrilled about seing another otherwise composed and reasonable woman getting brainrot by cock, wich would a repeat of Erina but with tits.
Regardless of that so far i have no reason to doubt the progress so far.
It's definitely about time the story moved onto the endgame zone, huh? Well, that may happen sooner than later.
As for Naomi, think of her more as an extension of Erina, rather than a brand new story arc. I definitely plan to go about it differently than I did with Erina.