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jmcronshaw

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Apr 19, 2020
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Nice looking models and stuff with a decent interface but just a needlessly boring and irritating beginning to the game. So the hints say put something in their coffee before you have any idea what that may be. Okay fine advance the story a bit and you find out you need to go to the lab, which is locked. Okay there is a lockpick in the online store, great. But oh it's $50 dollars and i only have $30. Okay how do i get money, talk to step-mom she says she'll give me some if i wash the dishes (which is called doing the laundry here) Okay i've done that 4 times in a row, no money. I shouln't have to do that task multiple times before i get the money to buy the lockpick. I know these are suppose to be games and you want this to feel like a game, but all i'm doing is deleting your game and checking on it later to see if the first 15 min are made any less annoying. Sorry if this seems overly harsh, you have very nice looking artwork and a serviceable story and UI, so i think this could be a success, but you've lost me with the tasks. Let the player get into the game first, have the prologue be linear with a more VN feel and the open up the game with some tasks, because if you don't hook the player no one is going to want to spend time searching around for what you are suppose to do next
 

negative1

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Jun 5, 2017
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It is wash the dishes man, washing the laundry is cleaning clothes. At a glance though your source code looks great through you are future proofing so the game will not be a hot mess down the road with clean code like this.

Edit: For the love of all that is porn, get rid of that loud male orgasm sound! I do not know why devs keep adding that dude screaming into their games.
 
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Provo1980

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Jan 7, 2021
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Looks nice, good luck.

p.s. love the sleep sex tag :p. Just a small note about it, if you want to see how it shouldn't be done check game double perception where the guy at first try face fucks the girl like he was preparing her for hours. The idea is building suspense over time, not to get caught and treading lightly, over time you risk more and more to a point you say oh who caresf lets try this and that ;), and maybe have an option that ends the game if she wakes up(you go too far or something)...
 
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insomnia1232

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Jul 30, 2020
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It is wash the dishes man, washing the laundry is cleaning clothes. At a glance though your source code looks great through you are future proofing so the game will not be a hot mess down the road with clean code like this.

Edit: For the love of all that is porn, get rid of that loud male orgasm sound! I do not know why devs keep adding that dude screaming into their games.
About 20 minutes if you figure out laundry=dishes.
Damn google translate
 

anon280

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Nov 11, 2017
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Thanks for feedback, this is a test version for sure, I'm still new to game develop,
You just reminded me that you are new to it, sorry if I was too harsh.
just want to show some nice animations.
I love the design of the models and home but I barely got to appreciate the animation. I'm not experienced in the technical reasons why the fps was so bad but I know from playing other games the animation played fine with just as good and even better graphic quality. Hope you can look into that.

Good luck!
 

insomnia1232

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Jul 30, 2020
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You just reminded me that you are new to it, sorry if I was too harsh.

I love the design of the models and home but I barely got to appreciate the animation. I'm not experienced in the technical reasons why the fps was so bad but I know from playing other games the animation played fine with just as good and even better graphic quality. Hope you can look into that.

Good luck!
Oh, sorry to hear that, I use 1080p/60fps videos, video file maybe too large, I'll take a look.
 
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Chris2041

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Oct 12, 2017
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After the sleeping pills and the shower scenes is something more or is this the end of this version?
 

Theburnz87

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Jun 4, 2017
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Nice looking models and stuff with a decent interface but just a needlessly boring and irritating beginning to the game. So the hints say put something in their coffee before you have any idea what that may be. Okay fine advance the story a bit and you find out you need to go to the lab, which is locked. Okay there is a lockpick in the online store, great. But oh it's $50 dollars and i only have $30. Okay how do i get money, talk to step-mom she says she'll give me some if i wash the dishes (which is called doing the laundry here) Okay i've done that 4 times in a row, no money. I shouln't have to do that task multiple times before i get the money to buy the lockpick. I know these are suppose to be games and you want this to feel like a game, but all i'm doing is deleting your game and checking on it later to see if the first 15 min are made any less annoying. Sorry if this seems overly harsh, you have very nice looking artwork and a serviceable story and UI, so i think this could be a success, but you've lost me with the tasks. Let the player get into the game first, have the prologue be linear with a more VN feel and the open up the game with some tasks, because if you don't hook the player no one is going to want to spend time searching around for what you are suppose to do next
After you do "Laundry" go to the stepmom's room at 21:30 Laundry button should be lit up and you do get 20$, for a first release could there be more yes but its not any worse than than some games have started.
 
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NakedSingularity

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0.1? *sigh*

Who's gonna be the chad to confirm what we already know in regards to its length. I've been that chad for too long i'm afraid
Not me. Loli +, incest +, Sandbox - (I do AVN's, emphasis on N= novel, when I wanna read a story, maybe make a few choices and be lazy, not figure out puzzles and click points on a map at certain times of the day like it's a game). I don't mess with Patreon either due to their shitty censorship policies and I don't see a Subscribestar option so with those tags it's probably not going to last long anyway.
 
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3.20 star(s) 6 Votes