VN Ren'Py The Last Challenge [S1 Ch.2b v0.2.4] [LustyDonkey]

[Reniere]

I'm going to be straight forward and Dead honest, There is a high chance of his getting abandoned at some point my main reasons.

1- Game already has 3 branches ( The cleaning lady, The bus ride, and This new branch)
2- It looks like more Branch's will be added as time goes on meaning longer development time.
3- Might take more then lets say 4 years to complete the game.
4- People might get fed up with to many branches and not enough story progression that they might not support.

I can keep going but ya catch what i am saying. Not enough progression, To many Branches and To long of a stretch between updates.
My opinion is simple concentrate on 1 story 1 branch and enjoy your work. Don't make it harder Just write your story don't bloat what you already have.

 

[rolinga69]

So i don't understand something, the game weights 12gb when you download but you can only watch a couple of scenes, cleaning lady, Samantha bathrom and Brenda garage sex.. i dunno if something happened but after a talk with Lexa it was like ending and then it trhew me to the main menu, if the game its 12gb i'm missing something? Like a LOT? I don't understand the game being so short but at the same time so heavy when you download it!!

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

So i don't understand something, the game weights 12gb when you download but you can only watch a couple of scenes, cleaning lady, Samantha bathrom and Brenda garage sex.. i dunno if something happened but after a talk with Lexa it was like ending and then it trhew me to the main menu, if the game its 12gb i'm missing something? Like a LOT? I don't understand the game being so short but at the same time so heavy when you download it!!

There are a LOT of forks on the main bus ride path. Like if you wait outside and Lexa gets in the fight, or the threesome with donny and gas station girl, etc. I didn't even realize the first time I played how much I was missing.

 

[Cat-in-the-Hat]

So i don't understand something, the game weights 12gb when you download but you can only watch a couple of scenes, cleaning lady, Samantha bathrom and Brenda garage sex.. i dunno if something happened but after a talk with Lexa it was like ending and then it trhew me to the main menu, if the game its 12gb i'm missing something? Like a LOT? I don't understand the game being so short but at the same time so heavy when you download it!!

+1 this, came here to say the exact same thing. Came to the end splash and thought "Oh, this must be from the 0.1 build, can't wait to get into the real story" but nope, over.

I played through most of the choices (save scumming mostly) and got to the city.... and.... for 12 gig, I'm left asking a) where's the rest and b) are the scenes in 16k or something, as there's only three of them (!!!).

I mean, it's quality so far, but it's short (like 2-3 gigs of a normal VN short), the models / animations are last gen and the file size is just ... what?!

 

[Lady Lydia]

You ever hear of stirrups?

Yes, and have you ever tried to sit with your legs banded and spread apart like on an horse and see how good your balance is? Even with the stirrups its not a miracle solution. Heck another question have you ever fired a weapon of those sort with a massive recoil? Anyhow the point unless your shotgun is the sort to fire birdshot, it has some pretty solid kick, and a LMG? Its the sort of weapons that typically require a bipod to be properly used, so how bad things are going to get on a horse? You'll end up shredding your own people when your gunfire will get completely out of control due to the recoil.

+1 this, came here to say the exact same thing. Came to the end splash and thought "Oh, this must be from the 0.1 build, can't wait to get into the real story" but nope, over.

I played through most of the choices (save scumming mostly) and got to the city.... and.... for 12 gig, I'm left asking a) where's the rest and b) are the scenes in 16k or something, as there's only three of them (!!!).

I mean, it's quality so far, but it's short (like 2-3 gigs of a normal VN short), the models / animations are last gen and the file size is just ... what?!

I suspect the graphics for the game are possibly entirely in like 8 or 16k, not just the animations, way more than necessary for a VN, which is what is likely bloating the game.

 

[JonJones5]

+1 this, came here to say the exact same thing. Came to the end splash and thought "Oh, this must be from the 0.1 build, can't wait to get into the real story" but nope, over.

I played through most of the choices (save scumming mostly) and got to the city.... and.... for 12 gig, I'm left asking a) where's the rest and b) are the scenes in 16k or something, as there's only three of them (!!!).

I mean, it's quality so far, but it's short (like 2-3 gigs of a normal VN short), the models / animations are last gen and the file size is just ... what?!

There is more then 3 scenes

Cleaning Lady (of which there is to my knowledge 3 variations [Footjob, Blackmail. Quickie])
Samantha [Quickie, Normal]
Brenda [Forget the options but I don't recall many]
and the grocery store girl (in which there is 3 main variations [FFM 3some, MMF 3some, and Just you and Her])

 

[Stifler's Mom]

Please give me the torrent file.

 

[lHarmonyl]

There is more then 3 scenes

Cleaning Lady (of which there is to my knowledge 3 variations [Footjob, Blackmail. Quickie])
Samantha [Quickie, Normal]
Brenda [Forget the options but I don't recall many]
and the grocery store girl (in which there is 3 main variations [FFM 3some, MMF 3some, and Just you and Her])

with this girl?

 

[thefattestcat]

sexy covid?

 

[JonJones5]

with this girl?

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No I think Tatianna is the grocery store girl name and Rosalina is the cleaning lady can't recall tho

 

[lHarmonyl]

No I think Tatianna is the grocery store girl name and Rosalina is the cleaning lady can't recall tho

The photo and the news suggest that there was history with this girl sad update

 

[Deyn21]

The game is good but I don't like the branching so early in the game.

If you miss a bus then you start a different game. It's like a 2 games in 1. And each have 50% content. Eh.

Anyway, good luck.

 

[sakuyas_mmaster]

Holy moly! The amount branching is crazy. It makes replaying somewhat interesting, but it makes it also difficult to guess the right dialogue choices to get the path you want. And it means this game will need a lot of work to advance all these paths.

 

[Parigi5]

Not gonna lie for a 12gb game i was expecting it to be much longer that it was, that felt like the intro to a 1-2 gb game. like whats there is great i have no complaints other than this seriously needs to be better optimised storage wise cause it ended way to soon for 12gb

 

[Jinyo]

Game was great but this has been in dev since 2023? I expected a ton more and more story progression other than the endless bus ride. At this pace the game won't ever be finished, which annoys the crap out of me cause I got invested.

 

[Innopriate User]

Theres an entirely different path now with a new sex scene(although not near as many options as the main route) and everything. Read under the changelog the dev tells you how to unlock it.

I'm a harem fan and I don't like long paths, the developer has messed things up too much here. So I do this: open URMx052, quickly check the new scenes, close the game. Not very impressed.

 

[thefattestcat]

wtf buddy please finish the MAIN branch before turning this into another temu call of duty with tits.

 

[Cat-in-the-Hat]

There is more then 3 scenes

Cleaning Lady (of which there is to my knowledge 3 variations [Footjob, Blackmail. Quickie])
Samantha [Quickie, Normal]
Brenda [Forget the options but I don't recall many]
and the grocery store girl (in which there is 3 main variations [FFM 3some, MMF 3some, and Just you and Her])

I included the cleaning lady & the grocery store in my count of 3 - I admit missing the entire "don't take the bus" route because... wut?! Who the heck designs a VN where a single illogical choice has an entire secondary branch before completing at least three chapters?!? WHY? At the very least, signpost this option as a BRANCH ***IMPORTANT*** CHOICE instead of "just met these characters, no I'm not going to act like a fucking psycho, we're supposed to be 19-20 year old secluded teenagers who have been living in "Eden", so no, no violence because I'm not RPing as a sociopath, thanks".

So, being generous, we have five or six sex scenes for 12 gigs, or 2 gig a sex scene.

This would have to be a whole lot better (and with current / next gen models, I want to see fucking pores for 12 gigs) to justify the massive bloat. (Oh, and the compressed is 1.2 gig, which... sounds a lot more accurate to the content available).

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Two predictions:

1) The whole "I have three chapters story-boarded, I know exactly what I'm doing"* comes off as highly suspect given the choice to wander off ADHD like into an entire missable alternate branch - as the story progresses (if it does), the Dev is going to get tangled up so fast he'll wish he was in 'NAM 1970.

2) This is never going to finish, and will bloat to about 20 gigs with perhaps nine (being generous) sex scenes before collapsing under the sheer weight of expectations.

Filed under: "What not to do when making a smut VN".


*in my head

 

[onefingersalute]

nice a new update

 

[soprano31]

... What a gorgeous new LI ...