considering how long your dev times are for your games, I wouldn't exactly listen to what you have to sayIs Angie ever going to get a moment in the spotlight?
View attachment 4035211
Perhaps she tries out the drug right before her and the MC get stuck in the elevator together, or something slightly less contrived?
Mmm... Angie
considering how long your dev times are for your games, I wouldn't exactly listen to what you have to say
let's get something straight. at no point in either of the threads of your games did you mention becoming a father. when you don't give a reason, it's logical for others to make assumptions about what happened. that being said, a simple "Sorry but being a father now takes precedence over developing these games." would have stopped any and all complaints. and my last thing I will say is this....congratulations of becoming a father and enjoy the years to come. get the kid to love Batman as soon as possibleAhhh you burned me!
You're right, becoming a father was a mistake and I should have continued working 80 hours a week at below minimum wage to keep up with monthly releases for my life's purpose of finishing my titty game as soon as possible.
It's cool, I still have time to resent the little fucker, and in retribution I'll wait until they don't make the cut for the high school basketball team to tell them they are a disappointment.
Thanks for the constructive criticism.
let's get something straight. at no point in either of the threads of your games did you mention becoming a father. when you don't give a reason, it's logical for others to make assumptions about what happened. that being said, a simple "Sorry but being a father now takes precedence over developing these games." would have stopped any and all complaints. and my last thing I will say is this....congratulations of becoming a father and enjoy the years to come. get the kid to love Batman as soon as possible
Haha, I've been waiting for someone to ask about Angie! I love her braids. Currently there are no plans for any romantic interludes with her, but I do like your idea, so never say never!Is Angie ever going to get a moment in the spotlight?
View attachment 4035211
Perhaps she tries out the drug right before her and the MC get stuck in the elevator together, or something slightly less contrived?
Mmm... Angie
Totally agree w/ANYTHING Brooke-related. Can NEVER get enough of her and office sex is always hot! Also noticed both light-hearted statue references, too funny. With the tight zoom on the conference room statue stuck in the floor, I did consider there might be some foreshadowing that Isabella or someone would later come in and trip over it or something (maybe that's your device for an Angie-angle story...and more office sex!?!). The silly little things (usually humorous) like the statue(s) are the little touches that make a game unique. Gives the game it's own distinct identity and a little of the dev's personality as well and since everyone likes to laugh, why not sprinkle them throughout?From the day that I created Brooke, I always envisioned a scene where they'd be banging in the office while she still had her hair up and glasses on! I was so happy to finally make that a reality. I also always wanted to do something with that silly chrome statue prop. Finally had fun with that too! And of course there was that funny hand statue prop in the Isabella sex scene! I may have gone a little overboard with the silly use of props, but it's my game, lol...
This is a very happy drug and the whole alllure of basically the elixir/potion of love gets to peole in the game.I can't quite put my finger on it but it just feels like the tone is off half the time. Like everybody is on happy drugs or something.
like in We Happy Few?I can't quite put my finger on it but it just feels like the tone is off half the time. Like everybody is on happy drugs or something. I'll be having a serious conversation about faked drug trials and cover ups with someone and they'll get distracted or reminisce about something.
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Interesting take, I've not heard that one before, but I do understand your point. When I'm writing, I have to always be conscious of not getting too far into the nitty gritty of the whole biotech drug plot. I actually want to go the way you are saying, but I'm afraid that if I get too serious and technical that people will get bored with it. I mean, this is an adult visual novel after all, so I do have to be aware of why people play these things. And it's not usually for a compelling tale of corporate espionage! So I try to balance the tale of the relationships with the story of the drug plot. In fact, many of the rewrites that I've done were because I realized that I had written like 4-5 serious scenes about the drug plot and nothing funny and/or no sex. That's a quick way to lose an audience!I can't quite put my finger on it but it just feels like the tone is off half the time. Like everybody is on happy drugs or something. I'll be having a serious conversation about faked drug trials and cover ups with someone and they'll get distracted or reminisce about something.
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
broiler_x, thanks for this new chapter.
There are good scenes and I liked the cliffhanger. I think the tag "ahegao" should be added.
To quibble again, I noticed a few minor problems:
=> In the kitchen, when Isabella is getting screwed on the table (right after the camera moves), there is a glitch in the graphics.
=> Small rendering bugs (see attached screenshots. Some are from earlier chapters. Isabella's hair seems to be a difficult thing to create.).
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
No doubt. Finding the right balance between plot and lewd is a challenge and I understand your predicament. Truly any requirements you add beyond just the story will impose some level of restriction on your writing.Interesting take, I've not heard that one before, but I do understand your point. When I'm writing, I have to always be conscious of not getting too far into the nitty gritty of the whole biotech drug plot. I actually want to go the way you are saying, but I'm afraid that if I get too serious and technical that people will get bored with it. I mean, this is an adult visual novel after all, so I do have to be aware of why people play these things. And it's not usually for a compelling tale of corporate espionage! So I try to balance the tale of the relationships with the story of the drug plot. In fact, many of the rewrites that I've done were because I realized that I had written like 4-5 serious scenes about the drug plot and nothing funny and/or no sex. That's a quick way to lose an audience!
That's what I thought. But thanks for the feedback.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Maybe I've been too sidetracked by the eyes, the huge tits, or the overall bombshell package but as a player who probably pays a tad more attention to detail than the average guy, I never even noticed any issues w/Isabella's hair!You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Starting in Chapter 5, all intimate scenes are by player choice. A big driver to the plot was the Emily and Isabella love triangle (just to be clear, Emily and Isabella are not going to be involved with each other). That story is involved in many scenes and if I made either of them optional in the beginning then a lot of the story would be left out. But like I said, that part is now established so in the latest update and moving forward, it will always be player choice for all romantic encounters.Why is Emily forced ? all other girls you can say no to ?