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Great. I found the MC extremely likable, I hope he stays that way.Thank you for the feedback, and I am glad you are enjoying the story.
First off everyone is entitled to their opinions as to what they like and don't like so don't feel bad telling me you didn't like something.
The narrator and Kelly stuff will be skippable going forward you will never need to see what they talk about. I like to use it to express my bad humor and to give people a recap incase they forget what happened in the last update. I also wanted to toss in the nudity for Kelly as she does not come into the story until chapter 5. There will be no more surpise nudity in there going forward either.
As for your question yes the MC does stop and give the homeless girl money it was not a one time thing. She will be back next chapter.
Do you have a schedule for releases, or is it "as is ready"? This is not an attempt to pressure, it is just me being curious of when we can expect to return to this story. When it's ready is fine, just hoping for better news ::wink::
Peace