I guess the girls in the Banner are the main LI's, does one of them die?
Because the intro made it sound like even one or more Li's die.
Why telling this, if this is the case?! It makes you not wana get invested in the Li's.
I don't care and don't want to know if other important Characters die, that
could be interesting for the story.
There is another high rated VN here that left people devastated at the end,
but it was still a nice journey. Because you didn't know and got invested in the LI's
If he would have said that one of the 2 main Li dies at the end people would
not cared for them, why would they?
What i read in the comments, the story seems realy interesting, so i
realy need to know this to start the story, i wouldn't care one bit and would go in blind
like in the other mentioned VN if it wasn't for the damn Intro that spoiled all interest.
Just mentioning vagly that people die in this VN would have been enough.
I wish i would have skipped it.
To understand why i do not completly like the intro regarding the Li's:
Its like having a story with time travel and in some point of the story
they travel back in time and everything that hapend to that point doesn't
matter anymore. Its fine for the reader because he enjoyed the story to this point.
But if this is mentioned that this will or will not be hapening, at the beginning of the
Story, the reader will or can't be realy invested in the story. Or in this case the Li's.