- Jan 15, 2018
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Scarface one I was laughing my butt off and was perfect. It was a great update and I know that if your friend TK was still around he would be proud of what you did to honor his memory. I was so glad when I saw the twins appear.
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I wanted to have a little fun with the dialog for Kelly in the scene. I thought it was appropriate.
I had to dance on the line of what I could and couldn't do with the twins there at the end. I hope it was an enjoyable compromise.
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It was perfect and BB/SB the way they are written and the interaction with the MC is great. Kelly dialog wants me to play it again.
I remember trying out this AVN and gave up on it thinking it just wasn't for me. Then a few months later I gave it a second try and I'm glad I did. I really enjoyed it and I'm also glad I did a play through of The Perfect Town before this update. I can't wait to see what the future of this saga holds. Good luck!
- Oct 15, 2016
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Agreed. Has the emotional depth of a puddle and such heavy handed plot lines they are painful to read. Add in a MC who is conveniently an idiot at times (like when they assault the base with no actual plan or prep) and who is surrounded by a cast of women whose remedy to a major love being lost is "we're horny, fuck us you'll feel better." Nice to see all the women embrace the fact that they have less competition now and jump on the MC as fast as they can. I mean for all the emotional commitment the characters have to each other it's more like "oops, sorry about you luck, moving on, too bad, so sad, sucks to be you, yay for me.."
Just another sad attempt at writing by a dev who believes the stunted emotional aspect of "a story doesn't have impact until someone dies", you know the type. The best thing that can happen is the MC get killed, and the purple hair chick with metal rings in her hair to die at the same time.
Maybe once they are both gone the story can reboot into something decent. Until the dev decides the story needs 'weight' again and kills another main character because they can't have any real tension or plot development without it. To much plot armor, until it's suddenly all removed as noted above, by characters who should know better based on their history and experience.
- Apr 28, 2020
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I am so glad to hear you gave in another shot. I know my game starts out pretty rough, as you can tell from a lot of the reviews. Most don't make it past chapters 1 or 2. However, I have found that a lot of people really start to enjoy the story around chapter 4 or 5 when the real story starts to pop up.
There is a lot of interesting content still to come and I hope you continue to enjoy it for years to come.
- Jan 21, 2021
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Congrats on finishing your first story, uncle loco, I enjoyed it overall and it was nice to see how you improved as it went along.
Can't say I was happy with some of the choices made at times, but that's life, would rather a dev make the story as he "envisioned" rather than cave to others even if I might not enjoy some of the outcomes.
At this point I can say I don't like MCs dad and even though the side story will try to redeem him in the viewer's eyes I doubt it will change my mind, I will still check it out though and if I don't like it then is it what it is, I will just move on.
Hope you had fun with it, and I'm looking forward to seeing the direct continuation of this story.
Can't say I was happy with some of the choices made at times, but that's life, would rather a dev make the story as he "envisioned" rather than cave to others even if I might not enjoy some of the outcomes.
At this point I can say I don't like MCs dad and even though the side story will try to redeem him in the viewer's eyes I doubt it will change my mind, I will still check it out though and if I don't like it then is it what it is, I will just move on.
Hope you had fun with it, and I'm looking forward to seeing the direct continuation of this story.
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Thank you for the positive comments, glad to hear you enjoyed it for the most part.
I won't talk too much about Sam, but I wrote him so the players would not like him at first. There is a lot to learn about him, and I hope I can get you to change your mind about him, even if it is just a little bit.
- Jan 21, 2021
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I will give it another update or two before jumping in, but I will definitely give it a fair shot.
Good luck with the side story.
- Sep 12, 2017
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First I meet SB and BB (who are absolute fucking smokeshows btw) and now this...
It's like you're taunting me now...They make me sad every time they aren't in new updates. I could play an entire game with nothing but that family in it.
Edit: Im also curious how a certain pink-haired individual keeps popping up in the background but never recognizes MC...
It's like you're taunting me now...They make me sad every time they aren't in new updates. I could play an entire game with nothing but that family in it.
Edit: Im also curious how a certain pink-haired individual keeps popping up in the background but never recognizes MC...
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- Jan 9, 2023
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My apologize for this stupid question. I downloaded the new release but it stops me at Chapter 12 and I cannot get to Chapter 13. What am I doing wrong? I admit, I am not the brightest bulb on the tree.
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LMAO, look about an inch below this...actually i guess that would depend on your monitor size.
yea it didn't show on mobile lolLMAO, look about an inch below this...actually i guess that would depend on your monitor size.
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Not sure it is possible you downloaded a link before it was updated. I went and double-checked all the links on the listed OP are the 0.13 update.
- Jan 9, 2023
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That I did sir, The file i have is "TheList-013-pc". Should I download it again?
By the way, I want to thank you for the game. I love it and cannot wait for the other "books". I am now doing The Perfect Town so I am up to speed for Chapter 13.
- Apr 28, 2020
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So every chapter I give a little shoutout to my favorite Devs and Games. Usually, you will see them on a laptop screen or a TV screen like the above image from Grandma's house. All games I feature are listed in the credits.
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Also at some point, that pink hair girl will be discussed.
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If you have the 0.13 link it should work fine. I have not had any issues reported that the code was not working. I know when I uploaded my copy to F95 I uploaded the one for Pixeldrain. You might want to try to download it again to see if that fixes the issue, but I would play The Perfect Town prior to chapter 13.
ehhh.... hard pass imo, playing as someone who suddenly decided to destroy a family because he wanted to get his dick wet not something i want to do
btw: is pretty shitty that you didn't include what did he do to have male offspring in the blurb