VN Ren'Py Completed The List [v0.13] [Uncle Loco]

[Uncle Loco]

ok i must admit that the game is pretty good,at least when is about the story plot the script overall,but ....the girsl are not to my likingatall,the only one i can make an excuse was gabriella,.why,...its easy she is the most voluoptous so yeah she is great ,....the others only the twins are more appealing but they were out of reach...a solid 4 ,but if i have to chek in the mirror again ,the other thing i wish i could change is mc face,....

I am glad to hear you are enjoying the story. Sorry to hear the girls except for Gabi are not to your liking. The twins BB and SB are a nod to the real TKA who passed away, we were planning to write a story about them together and this was meant to help set that up. I hate most of the male models available and wanted to avoid using the most common ones. I figure most people play for the girls rather than what the MC looks like.

 

[Uncle Loco]

Well I finished 0.13 and even the perfect town. hmmm. For me the List ended at 0.11 I will just make up my own story in my head from then on. 0.12 was a shit show and is one of the worst updates for a game... ever. Now to 0.13, it was pretty much what I figured it would be, it did not have anything to make me feel any better about the game.

And the perfect town I felt was just dull and did not have any characters I care about.

I wish the dev well, but without Alexis, the game seems dull to me. I might revisit the game in a year or so, but for me I am done with this.

peace

I am sorry to hear the game was not for you or I disappointed you with my decisions. Thank you for giving it a shot and playing it through to the end. The Perfect Town is just getting started and will take another update to really get going. The only other thing I can say is Alexis will be back.

 

[Uncle Loco]

I'm confused. Is the next saga going to be same characters or is each saga going to be different characters all together?

The entire Saga revolves around the prophecy Eve talks about. Since Rob is supposed to be the chosen one the games will all revolve around him in some way. The first game introduces us to Rob and his girls, game 2 The Perfect Town is about his father and Mages. The List part 2 (game 3) will revisit Rob and his team.

 

[Nezron]

I am sorry to hear the game was not for you or I disappointed you with my decisions. Thank you for giving it a shot and playing it through to the end. The Perfect Town is just getting started and will take another update to really get going. The only other thing I can say is Alexis will be back.

I am not trying to be a hater or anything. And I have a notion on how you intend to bring Alexis back... If I am correct then you will take something else from the MC just to bring her back. You have already taken 1 potential child away from the MC, was that not enough?

Anyway it is your game, I think you had a great game going before you killed Alexis, now the game feels hollow without her. I think every harem game needs a queen character. Alexis was the MC's strength. Lets be real... Bob is not mentally strong. Just look how he handled her death.... not good, he was not there for the rest of the girls.

There is just nothing to be invested in anymore, you keep too many secrets from the MC, so he just feels like a pawn, and not very important, at least 2-3 girls are pregnant, but they don't feel they can tell him... so eventually you will spring the news on the MC... how is he suppose to feel that they would not tell him? I would be upset, but I don't feel like taking that ride with the MC.

Anyway thank you for the great game up to 0.11, I will replay that because all of that was great, had love, humor, action, some sadness.. but not too much. Your game was the best vampire game I had ever played up to that point.

well anyway I wish you well.
peace

 

[Tiny@1]

... There is an early bad ending where Rob leaves with Lily and they have a child ....

Spoiler: Bad Ending........

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[HUNUTAN]

I played the game just for Ellie. She has a pretty good look, but for some reason there isn't much content with her compared to others. And there isn't a single full-length image of her in the entire game... It was disappointing. Many scenes and angles were completely repeated. The cameras are often too close and only show half of the girls' bodies, which is inconvenient (in all scenes with girls). Why do I need only half of a girl? I need the whole girl.

 

[Avaron1974]

Since i have not seen this before, I'm guessing that the pregnancy tag was only added as an ending, is that about right?

We're just finishing book 1 of 5 .... there is no ending yet.

Soooo, funny thought.....

Alexis is going to be born again as Madisons and Robs kid but she'll be mortal.

So to live together forever again, Rob will have to turn her.

So, not only will he be married to his daughter but he'll also be the daddy, daddy. Double dad. Dad squared.

 

[Uncle Loco]

I played the game just for Ellie. She has a pretty good look, but for some reason there isn't much content with her compared to others. And there isn't a single full-length image of her in the entire game... It was disappointing. Many scenes and angles were completely repeated. The cameras are often too close and only show half of the girls' bodies, which is inconvenient (in all scenes with girls). Why do I need only half of a girl? I need the whole girl.

I will keep this in mind going forward. Ellie is pretty important to the rest of the story considering she is a Mage and the MC will need a Mage going forward.

 

[Modhunter]

I am not trying to be a hater or anything. And I have a notion on how you intend to bring Alexis back... If I am correct then you will take something else from the MC just to bring her back. You have already taken 1 potential child away from the MC, was that not enough?

Anyway it is your game, I think you had a great game going before you killed Alexis, now the game feels hollow without her. I think every harem game needs a queen character. Alexis was the MC's strength. Lets be real... Bob is not mentally strong. Just look how he handled her death.... not good, he was not there for the rest of the girls.

There is just nothing to be invested in anymore, you keep too many secrets from the MC, so he just feels like a pawn, and not very important, at least 2-3 girls are pregnant, but they don't feel they can tell him... so eventually you will spring the news on the MC... how is he suppose to feel that they would not tell him? I would be upset, but I don't feel like taking that ride with the MC.

Anyway thank you for the great game up to 0.11, I will replay that because all of that was great, had love, humor, action, some sadness.. but not too much. Your game was the best vampire game I had ever played up to that point.

well anyway I wish you well.
peace

Uncle Loco has a plan. The fact that you were emotionally invested in Alexis and fell her loss is proof that his writing did the job that is was supposed to. We all have our reasons for starting the game, story, porn, or both and theen head cannon for how we want it to go but, if you go to the end that means something gave you a reason to see what happens. I will say I am not happy that EVE is beating around the bush about Alexis' fate to Rob but, I trust the process. There has to be some trsagedy for the hero to grow through. Nobody complained about John Wicks dog or wife, we just said kill them all. It's just MHO anyway

 

[Avaron1974]

at least 2-3 girls are pregnant, but they don't feel they can tell him... so eventually you will spring the news on the MC... how is he suppose to feel that they would not tell him? I would be upset,

I will admit that you've touched on the one thing I really didn't like about the game, all the pregnancy secrets. The main reason being they aren't worth hiding from him and need to be said sooner rather than later. It's not exactly something they can hide for long.

I think anyone would be upset at people that claim to love you hiding something that big, especially at a time he needed good news.

Nobody complained about John Wicks dog or wife,

His wife was already dead at the start so none of us were invested in her character and the dog was on screen for all of a couple of minutes.

Besides that, we watched John Wick for John Wick not John Wick and dog.

I get your point but bad example.

 

[Avaron1974]

would be good to have a choice with maddison like with elli

She's kinda super important to the story though.

If he didn't fuck Madison, the plot of future books can't happen type of important.

 

[Uncle Loco]

I guess I am going to have to change the story up a bit from what was planned in regard to the pregnancy stuff. I have to figure out a way to do it that makes sense considering the reason I had for keeping the one from him.

Kelly's event was the way to keep Madison's pregnancy a secret, but I am going to have to figure something else out now. I had a plan B but it is kind of messy and will take some set-up.

I will say that if you are on Gabi's path she is bound to Nathan and he is the one that is preventing her from telling Rob about the child. I don't get into it in the game but Nathan knows way more about the book and the prophecy than he lets on. His sire passed the book onto him with the instructions that one day the chosen one would come for the book. To his surprise the chosen one was mortal so he wanted to take advantage of that by getting his maid impregnated with the chosen ones child thinking that could give him an advantage somehow. I was not planning on getting into this in the story so I have no issues discussing it here.

There is one other surprise coming but I will have to figure that one out or remove it.

 

[FatGiant]

(at ch3 now)
not much of a critical thinker our mc huh ...
or thinker at all ...
the overheard conversations - mc : oi pussy n ass !!
he suddenly having a photografic memory - who cares , the mc not (so far)
those shakes he get from alexis ..
and not even one time he wonders that shes not being seen at daytime...


the harem building -
would be good to have a choice with maddison like with elli


not a bad game at all - but some inconsistencies here and there

She's kinda super important to the story though.

If he didn't fuck Madison, the plot of future books can't happen type of important.

Yep.

Where choices are possible, they exist. Some are simply not possible. You'll see later why.

Peace

 

[Uncle Loco]

(at ch3 now)
not much of a critical thinker our mc huh ...
or thinker at all ...
the overheard conversations - mc : oi pussy n ass !!
he suddenly having a photografic memory - who cares , the mc not (so far)
those shakes he get from alexis ..
and not even one time he wonders that shes not being seen at daytime...


the harem building -
would be good to have a choice with maddison like with elli


not a bad game at all - but some inconsistencies here and there

The real story will start to open up soon for you. You made it past the hard parts. Looking at you chapter 1. I promised myself no reworks so people are stuck with the mess from chapter 1/2.

Madison is extremely important to the story so you are stuck with her sorry. There are a few more you are stuck with too, and several optional ones too.

 

[FatYoda]

Which one Britney or Judy?

britney

 

[FatGiant]

britney

"I'm not Britney!"

 

[GandalfTheWhite]

In case one is looking and wondering, one *ahem* incest patch.
Edit (March 2, 2025): Have fun

May or may not break saves.

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[Eleanorduval]

I am sorry to hear the game was not for you or I disappointed you with my decisions. Thank you for giving it a shot and playing it through to the end. The Perfect Town is just getting started and will take another update to really get going. The only other thing I can say is Alexis will be back.

definatly u should bring alexis,the people reclaim her lol

 

[e6mill]

"I'm not Britney!"

 

[Cazzan]

Uncle Loco has a plan. The fact that you were emotionally invested in Alexis and fell her loss is proof that his writing did the job that is was supposed to. We all have our reasons for starting the game, story, porn, or both and theen head cannon for how we want it to go but, if you go to the end that means something gave you a reason to see what happens. I will say I am not happy that EVE is beating around the bush about Alexis' fate to Rob but, I trust the process. There has to be some trsagedy for the hero to grow through. Nobody complained about John Wicks dog or wife, we just said kill them all. It's just MHO anyway

While I'm not talking about this game (I like this one), it's not really true that someone being emotionally affected means everything was great. A lot of games here go for some sort of emotional rug-pull where they kill a beloved character for shock value at the end and think it's some sort of high fiction. It's not. It's just bad writing, and/or the author acting out a superiority complex.

Again - not saying that's the case here, because this story is not ended, and I do believe there is a larger reason - but I've seen it way too much.