Bomber86

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hmm... I have The List complete now, but what sticks in my mind is that Alexis is not (for me) the most important character in the saga, but Ellie is, and to some extent Charlotte too.
Why? It's in the conversation with Eve when she talked about the prophecy that Rob will unite all beings, humans, vampires, mages etc.
Because in the situation when Rob was possessed, you saw Ellie cast magic to open the door. It was only a short sequence, but it was clear to see.
Charlotte because she's a vampire. Here you could argue Alexis is (was) a vampire too, but Charlotte seems more powerful, just looking at her status within the community.
I still don't understand why Ellie in particular is only optional for the harem, she should have a permanent place.
I'm also not really sad that Alexis was killed, if you look at her actions, it's often pure selfishness behind it, for example in the hospital when she forces her will on Rob to go to her, gives him shakes spiked with blood, or in the action to make Rob a vampire. Perhaps important story-wise, but anything but smart (in my opinion).

The twins at the end of chapter 13 should be the exact opposite of BB and SB, because if I understood it correctly, they should be from heaven, righteous, religious (honoring Vaster and Mother), while BB and SB indulge in the sins of lust. The pronunciation of the respective twins also fits in with this.
 

Uncle Loco

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it says completed thats why i dont understand
The List (game 1 of 5) is completed. The story will continue in The Perfect Town (game 2 of 5). After that it will be The List 2. So while the first game is complete the saga will continue. It is just how I am splitting the game up.
 
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Uncle Loco

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hmm... I have The List complete now, but what sticks in my mind is that Alexis is not (for me) the most important character in the saga, but Ellie is, and to some extent Charlotte too.
Why? It's in the conversation with Eve when she talked about the prophecy that Rob will unite all beings, humans, vampires, mages etc.
Because in the situation when Rob was possessed, you saw Ellie cast magic to open the door. It was only a short sequence, but it was clear to see.
Charlotte because she's a vampire. Here you could argue Alexis is (was) a vampire too, but Charlotte seems more powerful, just looking at her status within the community.
I still don't understand why Ellie in particular is only optional for the harem, she should have a permanent place.
I'm also not really sad that Alexis was killed, if you look at her actions, it's often pure selfishness behind it, for example in the hospital when she forces her will on Rob to go to her, gives him shakes spiked with blood, or in the action to make Rob a vampire. Perhaps important story-wise, but anything but smart (in my opinion).

The twins at the end of chapter 13 should be the exact opposite of BB and SB, because if I understood it correctly, they should be from heaven, righteous, religious (honoring Vaster and Mother), while BB and SB indulge in the sins of lust. The pronunciation of the respective twins also fits in with this.
Just wanted to address the new twins. They do have real names and will be important to the story. They come from a warrior line, and fight for family, honor, and a belief in a prophecy. I tried to address this in their dialog. I will tone it down a bit once they are introduced officially, but they will always be about honor and family. There are a lot more to these two, but I will leave that to the story to tell.

Not saying that BB and SB don't have a warrior mentality, they are more pure killers at time and will kill for fun or sport. They don't always see the difference between right and wrong. They don't look at others as their equals and unless they are told to do so or respect you for something.
 
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FatYoda

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it says completed thats why i dont understand
for the same reason that Fellowship of the ring is a completed book....??? It's the story of his time during his Vampire Creation, and his Creator...she died and now he has moved to a new city. It's an extremely natural transition to a new book in the series.
 
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ItsNotMeToo

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Saw the completed tag, decent rating, and enough genre tags to interest me.

I'm into episode 2 and the writing / storyline is a bit... elementary. Main character mary-sue'ing his way to getting immediately laid by women throwing themselves at him (especially one after telling him about SAs...)... does the writing / story get better? I'm not looking for hyper-realism, but hoping the story improves soon.
 
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