VN Ren'Py Onhold The Loving Son [v0.8] [17MOONKEYS]

[Savilesavile]

Some honest feedback:

As long as there is huge-breasted, dominant MILF(s)—either futa or not—who dominates submissive male(s), the game will always be good, and I might promote it.

You add flat chests: as long as there is a huge-breasted, dominant MILF(s), I might consider playing it (even though I'll skip the flat chested trash anyway).

You put male domination: I leave. You reverse the dominance from female to male: I leave.

U need a doctor

 

[Cornfield]

This VN appears to be dead.

 

[EvilLadyKitten]

This VN appears to be dead.

I mean 5 games in development and none finished yeah seems like this dev has no attention span or no interest on finishing any project whatsoever

 

[Cornfield]

I think he is a "Dairy Farmer" .

 

[redoubt27]

The lack of dialogue choices hurts the experience.

The current MC is a switch, meaning he can go from being dominant to submissive, but IMO, most people are not like that, most people are either dominant or submissive, not both.

If you just added a very, very, very simple choice dialogue menu, you could easily cater to three audiences:
a) people who like their MC To be dominant and in control
b) people who like their MC to be submissive and not in control
c) people who like their MC to be a switch, can be dominant or submissive

A simple, simple dialogue choice will maximize your target audience and should increase revenue.

Remember, let the player CHOOSE which sexual action they want to perform, the more control you give the player, the more engaging their experience will be. Giving the player choice will increase their immersion.

Great render quality, some of the best I've ever seen, top 1% on this website, great job.

Ideas are very creative.

Great feedback and excellent advice.
However, most people are in fact, switch...
Psychology supports that ALL humans are wired to be both sexually dominant and submissive, depending on their mood or the presence of certain conditions...

That's why it's great that a MC be switch, and giving the player/reader choices...

 

[Drewbie]

All people might have a degree of sub and dom in them, but usually when they're seeking out porn they are focusing on the one they want more.

 

[redoubt27]

All people might have a degree of sub and dom in them, but usually when they're seeking out porn they are focusing on the one they want more.

Generally, I agree. They'll seek out what they want more, at that given point in time.
Being sub or dom mood this week doesn't mean the person isn't a switch.

And if they're in a particular mood this week, say dom, a story that has an exclusive sub MC, they're likely to skip that story, and there's no guarantee they see it or come back to it later on when they're feeling more in a sub mood.

That's why the previous advice was good, to appeal to as broad of an audience as possible.
And that means, a switch MC, capable of being both dom and sub, at different points in time.
Give the reader/player the control to choose when to be dominant or submissive.

 

[hakarlman]

Great feedback and excellent advice.
However, most people are in fact, switch...
Psychology supports that ALL humans are wired to be both sexually dominant and submissive, depending on their mood or the presence of certain conditions...

That's why it's great that a MC be switch, and giving the player/reader choices...

That's interesting, can you link me to an article or report that shows some data on this?

EDIT: I did some searching and found some articles, but I still have my doubts. I think in the end, people will prefer either prefer dom or sub path, not mixing the two; unless they choose this specifically. Hopefully the dev can break out of kinetic novels and into a very, very basic dialogue branch system. That will lead to more engagement with the user and I bet he'd make more $$$ on patreon.