I hope the writing gets better as the game progresses. I've only been playing about 10 seconds, and I already want to delete the game from my hard drive. The spelling, grammar, and punctuation need a complete overhaul from what I can tell already.
I hope the writing gets better as the game progresses. I've only been playing about 10 seconds, and I already want to delete the game from my hard drive. The spelling, grammar, and punctuation need a complete overhaul from what I can tell already.
It does. Chapter 1 needs the most work there. Chapter 2 is better. Chapter 3 and on are quite good for spelling and grammar. You'll still see the occasional odd use of words, but on the whole once you hit Ch3 it's all good. Plus, most of the action is near the end of Ch2 and on.
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"The Manor" narrates the tale of a young man leading a mundane life, whose existence takes an abrupt turn when he unravels the truth about his parentage. He is swiftly relocated to an unfamiliar family, embarking on a journey to uncover further revelations about his past and his newfound relatives. This intricate narrative delves into a series of provocative circumstances, exploring various explicit encounters along the way.
Is "The Manor [Chapter 1 v0.1.5] [0ptimus]" on Fap Nation the same game as this? I don't see version 0.1.5 in the changelog here so just a bit confused.