Well, this is sadly a mediocre game.
First off, if you decide to boot this game, which I don't think you should, lower the sound. Like, to the minimum. The boot-up intro WILL deafen you. It's louder than the CS:GO intro. You have been warned.
Secondly, I uh... I don't know how you can screw up the technical basics of a VN this badly. The primary purpose of a font is to be very easily readable. Fuck style choices, they aren't as important, go for something basic like Arial. This game goes for a very fancy, but difficult to read font instead. Screens shouldn't have to wait for the sound if nothing happens. In this game they do. Speed of loading of everything is generally more important than animated fanciness. But not in this game, here you will experience load times. Generally, less is usually more for a VN. And no, this doesn't mean you have to sacrifice graphics, or even sounds, which yes, are quite decent in this game.
Thirdly, the writing suffers from annoyingly misplaced punctuation (periods and commas). It's misplaced often enough to appear intentional. Not critical to the enjoyment, but annoying nonetheless.
The plot (and by extension, character) is what I'd call halfway great. The premise is great, the setup is great, but the development of it is not. There is this character who even the author knows only exists to railroad the story, and well, said character is always overusing that. She's like a Mary Sue, except in her presence, everything loses free will and stops making any sense. It's like she's the one with mind control powers, and not us. In the first encounter with her the author himself made what I can only describe as a self-deprecating joke, where they gave us a reasonable choice to make, and then had her put a gun to our head and make us change said choice. The natural direction of the plot is for MC to start exploring his power, catch on to the... Force of antagonism's existence on his own, and then there would not be any need to railroad us, because we'd have explored everything there is to explore, encountered said character naturally, and dealt with it naturally. Also, that character forces you into an unavoidable femdom scene, which is teased, but doesn't even happen before the end of the update. Kill this character with fire and you'd have a pretty great plot and characters to fill it.
The lewd scenes are also very rare (there's 2, in the game about an hour and a half long at this point), and they are not by MC, MC is basically watching porn there, so it's literally worse than porn. At least in porn you can skip to the action.
Overall, meh. Meh meh meh. I wanted to give this game a 2, but it's not what I'd describe as "bad", just... Extremely mediocre. It reminds me greatly of another, more popular, completed game, with a very similar premise, and while the problems the two face are quite different from one another, they have really good premises, and end on the exact same feeling of "meh". Play this if you're looking for a quick wank. Don't expect any greatness.