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VN Ren'Py The Missing Part [Ch. 2] [jPk vns]

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Quetzzz

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Vicky is not helping herself in any way shape or form.
Like I said in another reply, I don't believe in true altruism. She does get something out of it. It could be validation by having Linda and the MC hook up, the satisfaction of having done something for two friends, or like you mentioned before, fearing the worst and not wanting the feeling of having done too little. Or any other driving force that motivated her.

The MC has already followed her advice from the start of CH1 and started picking his life up.
You're right. I agree.
But that she knows the MC well, has been there for him, and gave him a needed kick in the pants, doesn't mean she can't be putting the cart in front of the horse now.

I'd say in a general sense (if I'm misreading myself, I apologise) you prefer to reserve your personal space for people you know well, and you're inserting your values on the MC (no problem)
Yeah, that shoe fits. I'm a fairly private person.
But, about inserting values on the MC, I have to disagree... At least to the extent that the game allows me to avoid it.
I never said my MC dislikes Vicky. I said I (the player) dislike her. If I was pushing my values onto the MC, I wouldn't be making that distinction.

I'll be the first to admit that I don't have the bandwidth to remember every minute detail and compile that into an overarching theory of everything. For that matter, I'm sure I've missed many details or interpreted facial expressions, words and actions differently than (most) others. But, I'm certain the developer is aware of this possibility, since it's by design that this MC doesn't share his thoughts and feelings with the player. The player is the one responsible for noticing details and interpreting them, not the MC.
Do my own experiences color how I interpret what's happening in the story? Absolutely. I don't think anyone who tries to make thoughtful decisions can say otherwise.

and then seem surprised that other people's MC's think differently.
I don't think this is fair. I made 1 (one!) remark about Vicky, and others started a discussion. I never replied to someone first to ask, "why do you like Vicky? This is what I think ..."
Everyone is entitled to their opinion and interpretation. I might prod their perspective a bit to see where they're coming from, but I've been nothing but respectful to other people's point of view... But that doesn't mean I have to accept their perspective at face value either.
I'm often wrong, don't always keep the big picture in mind, and often learn things through these discussions, but I'm not drawing my own conclusions out of thin air. My replies should indicate that I have given it thought and consideration.

Has a friend ever thrown an awkward surprise birthday party for you? Invited you out to dinner, and when you get there you realise you've been fooled into a blind date? Been partnered with the signle bridesmaid at a wedding?
No.

I just think Vicky's doing her best as a friend whether or not wise
We do agree on that... Aren't we just arguing semantics?

I don't think Vicky can do anything that makes my MC hate her, except for cheating on Ben or something ridiculous like that.
When Vicky yelled out to stop flirting, I assumed my MC realized she was setting them up and playing a game, that's why he kept things neutral. My impression of the MC is that he's humble, someone who likes to go unnoticed, who doesn't like surprises or be in the spotlight. He's also averse to Vicky making a big thing out of nothing, as his conversation with Ben about the special place suggests.
Is he shooting himself in the foot by answering neutrally? Most likely, time will tell. I won't complain if Linda never finds the confidence to speak with him again.
 
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santaokay

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jPk vns Thank you for creating such a masterpiece. I love almost everything about this game. The way you handle all of the characters is amazing. They're all so alive and distinctive, from their interaction with each other, their appearance to those smalls subtle details like when Hailey falls onto the floor the first time in the office and refuses MC's help. My only nitpick is how you handled your music during the prologue.
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Anyway, your game is amazing, looking forward to more of this amazing game.
 

Quetzzz

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Before Ben received the phone call from MC, the music gets upbeat and it really disrupted the mood there for me, I wonder if it's intentional.
Yeah, that's a perspective switch. Because Ben is blissfully unaware, he is in a good mood, which the music reflects.
This helps to make the impact of him hearing the news more felt. If the music had been somber the entire time, this impact would be lessened, I think.
 

santaokay

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Yeah, that's a perspective switch. Because Ben is blissfully unaware, he is in a good mood, which the music reflects.
This helps to make the impact of him hearing the news more felt. If the music had been somber the entire time, this impact would be lessened, I think.
That does make sense. I think it will come down to personal preference. I think no music there, just Ben's reaction would have been enough for me. But the impact was indeed felt.
 
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Quetzzz

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That does make sense. I think it will come down to personal preference. I think no music there, just Ben's reaction would have been enough for me. But the impact was indeed felt.
True, having no music could work as well. I imagine this adding a bit more suspense and anticipation to that scene, instead of providing contrast.
 

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Does the game will have a lot of choices and does the choices will matter for the game or its a linear path? How many girls the game will have? how many chapters will the game have?
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The information about the paths/Li's I am currently willing to share can be found



There are currently 8 more chapters planned, but this is a flexible number. The game will get as many chapters as it needs to be finished, but I don't think it will differ much from the additional 8 (10 full chapters in total).
 

Ciaran8023

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I'm very early into it but I just had to drop a comment; pacing and scene framing are great thus far. I'm not even irked by the autoplay which I usually dislike in most games.
Also dear dev, fuck you, respectfully. I wasn't exactly planning on crying like a little bitch at 3 AM, but here we are. Fucking prologue hit me harder than most entire games.

Welp, time to check out the rest.

EDIT: Goddamn what a cliffhanger, fuuuuuck.
Also, all the characters are quite interesting in their own way, having a hard time picking a favourite honestly, they're all very well written and just feel very organic.
Definitely looking forward to chapter 3.
 
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MattoElias

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What a game wow :O Without dropping spoilers. in the prologue i was sad when it happened the first time, but when it happened the second time... fuck that actually hurt... Not even ashamed to admit that i shed a few tears. The writing is incredible and you see that the dev is a super talented writer who can get emotions across really well. This is a VN you really get invested in for the story and it really does pull you in. This shot up to my top 5 adult vn's so quick and i can't wait for more. When i get more financially secure i'm definitely supporting this dev.

Also the MC is giving me a young Silverter Stallone vibes. Dunno if thats intentional or pure coincidence. He looks a lot like him in some angles
 

John972

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I'm very early into it but I just had to drop a comment; pacing and scene framing are great thus far. I'm not even irked by the autoplay which I usually dislike in most games.
Also dear dev, fuck you, respectfully. I wasn't exactly planning on crying like a little bitch at 3 AM, but here we are. Fucking prologue hit me harder than most entire games.

Welp, time to check out the rest.

EDIT: Goddamn what a cliffhanger, fuuuuuck.
Also, all the characters are quite interesting in their own way, having a hard time picking a favourite honestly, they're all very well written and just feel very organic.
Definitely looking forward to chapter 3.
What a game wow :O Without dropping spoilers. in the prologue i was sad when it happened the first time, but when it happened the second time... fuck that actually hurt... Not even ashamed to admit that i shed a few tears. The writing is incredible and you see that the dev is a super talented writer who can get emotions across really well. This is a VN you really get invested in for the story and it really does pull you in. This shot up to my top 5 adult vn's so quick and i can't wait for more. When i get more financially secure i'm definitely supporting this dev.

Also the MC is giving me a young Silverter Stallone vibes. Dunno if thats intentional or pure coincidence. He looks a lot like him in some angles
Your not the only one. Prologue hit me hard too.
I think we're all at that stage where we need to approach the mods to create an F95 "The Missing Part" Support Group. We could, say, meet on Wednesdays and help each other work through our PTSD from playing the prologue. ;):)

Here... I'll start:

Hello, my name is John, and I am a "The Missing Part" prologue survivor...
 

fermenal

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this game goes the right direction i love VN that are more focused in the story than anything else at start i hate the mc visuals but after the prologue it changes and it looks mature and like how the story develps nevertheless its so sad story but just builds to focus in what happen to the mc to reach that point sometimes make me have a few tears and sometimes make me laugh i like how this game its devepoing and i love the cameo of bella i hope summers gone dont go that way since will be a huge spoiler in the incoming updates , lastly i hope the next episode dont come in half year but i think it takes time to write and do the visuals as good as goes just keep the good work and hope to find more games like this it gime me some vibes of leap of faith and of course summers gone if someone knows another game like this i would aprreciate the recomendation
 

Elduriel

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this game goes the right direction i love VN that are more focused in the story than anything else at start i hate the mc visuals but after the prologue it changes and it looks mature and like how the story develps nevertheless its so sad story but just builds to focus in what happen to the mc to reach that point sometimes make me have a few tears and sometimes make me laugh i like how this game its devepoing and i love the cameo of bella i hope summers gone dont go that way since will be a huge spoiler in the incoming updates , lastly i hope the next episode dont come in half year but i think it takes time to write and do the visuals as good as goes just keep the good work and hope to find more games like this it gime me some vibes of leap of faith and of course summers gone if someone knows another game like this i would aprreciate the recomendation
Not that I disagree with what you say, but try it with a little more punctuation and formatting, coz it's hard to follow what you are trying to say. As for similar games, this is not the place for that, look in the dedicated forum section for game recommendations.
 

yossa999

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I think we're all at that stage where we need to approach the mods to create an F95 "The Missing Part" Support Group. We could, say, meet on Wednesdays and help each other work through our PTSD from playing the prologue. ;):)

Here... I'll start:
Sounds like you guys are in dire need of The Missing Part Offtopic Thread. :KEK:
 
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ImariKurumi

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Holy shiet the ending of chp 2. That was a goddamn curveball. So unfair, that's cheating!?!!?!?!
I remember watching a KR/JP soap opera, can't remember name, had the same thing going on with chapter 2 ending. We all know what's gonna happen. Give the guy/us a break.

God-Emperor, deliver us!!!
 
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