VN Ren'Py The Missing Part [Ch.3] [jPk vns]

[Dessolos]

After the meeting, I dont like Lisa, i dont know why, but i just dont

I wouldn't say I dislike like Lisa after the meeting but kind of the same for some reason the meeting made me less interested in Lisa compared to the other 2 no idea why

 

[Jarulf]

1. I feel like there's a bit too many coincidences and convenient details in her story. The Madelyn name, both girls being writers, father reappearing just to give a name, mother being dead, the girls having different mothers…
2. I think that getting an identical replacement for both the wife and the daughter is a bit too "on the nose" and belittles Madelyn herself as a character, like Ben said. Her whole character right now is Ella's sister, Maddy's namesake, not a separate person. A twist where she's an impostor who grows to love the MC and regret her ruse could shift the attention from the dead and back to her.
3. I like twists in general. Except those making a LI a different kind of girl entirely, I hate those.

Maybe the MC is hallucinating everything. There is no Madelyn, except in his mind, an amalgam of wife and daughter.
I'm joking. It couldn't be true, right?

 

[Jarulf]

maybe she has a dick

That would drive a lot of players insane, at least with rage.

 

[Zorro#34]

Maybe the MC is hallucinating everything. There is no Madelyn, except in his mind, an amalgam of wife and daughter.
I'm joking. It couldn't be true, right?

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[jPk vns]

Me, because JPK isn't going to spoil what it is

Well I will.

In Chapter 4...

 

[Michkooo]

Can we confirm that MC's father and Ella/Madelyn's are not the same person ?

Please don't make another incest story AVN, I really like this one

 

[Elduriel]

Can we confirm that MC's father and Ella/Madelyn's are not the same person ?

Please don't make another incest story AVN, I really like this one

the LDNA surprise incest was pretty well done though

 

[D4rkK1ng]

thank you for the update, fantastic job dev.

 

[elkon98]

Man, i had to stop for a while after the prologue. shit hit in the feels like very few avn have so far... nice storytelling and animations in general. defo got to follow this till its over

 

[Vortex@]

Is chapter 3 when we are supposed to pick a main LI? I'm in Chapter 3, had the talk with sarah, now I'm with Lisa. So far I'm still picking choices for every girls path. Never played a solo Li vn before, was just wondering how we was going to pick, does it straight out ask who we want? Or should I have already not been choosing everyone's path choices?

 

[Dessolos]

Is chapter 3 when we are supposed to pick a main LI? I'm in Chapter 3, had the talk with sarah, now I'm with Lisa. So far I'm still picking choices for every girls path. Never played a solo Li vn before, was just wondering how we was going to pick, does it straight out ask who we want? Or should I have already not been choosing everyone's path choices?

nah you can manwhore still. my main save is a manwhore one cause I was lazy as I just wanted to see more of this amazing game. The MC has the option in the update to tell all the girls about the others and he is not ready for a relationship yet. So it's clear that won't happen yet

 

[Vortex@]

nah you can manwhore still. my main save is a manwhore one cause I was lazy as I just wanted to see more of this amazing game. The MC has the option in the update to tell all the girls about the others and he is not ready for a relationship yet. So it's clear that won't happen yet

Thanks, i was confused by the changelog mentioning choosing our Li in chapter 3

 

[meskuzi]

Many thoughts came throw. But i rly apreciate if there will be "genre" - "sad" or smth like that. Game start was rough but then something like "lightening the mood" came by. And around end 1st episode brings back those sad vibes again. Such a mood killer. But still - story good. Gl with your game. Ill definently check this game untill the end. Wish you best jPk vns

 

[link18]

"sad" or smth like that. Game start was rough but then something like "lightening the mood" came by. And around end 1st episode brings back those sad vibes again.

That’s grief and mourning a loved one for you it always comes back, on top of that ; "no parent should ever have to bury their child"

 

[Sneak Monkey]

Begins with MC in a vest with "Stay Simple Stay True" written on it. I hate him already and I'm only a few renders in

 

[meskuzi]

That’s grief and mourning a loved one for you it always comes back, on top of that ; "no parent should ever have to bury their child"

Best words from Harry Potter (lightening the mood) LoR (c) But my point is some games as this one and "leap of faith" which we have on this site, in my opinion, should have some kind "genre or tag" on main (search) page which give us notice that this game have some "sad vibes". I'm rly understand it and accept it. But not in Monday Sry if my engl is bad not my 1st language. BTW! Refference to SG was funny

 

[slick97]

Begins with MC in a vest with "Stay Simple Stay True" written on it. I hate him already and I'm only a few renders in

We all felt that way in the beginning (except for the few who see that MC as their spirit animal)... but just hang in there until chapter 1 and I promise he gets better.

in my opinion, should have some kind "genre or tag" on main (search) page which give us notice that this game have some "sad vibes". I'm rly understand it and accept it. But not in Monday

I'd be down for a "tragic" tag to be added although it's rather rare that a dev is a skilled enough author to write a gut wrenching story well. Despite JPK dedicating little screen time to Ella and Maddy in the prologue he compensates for it by adding flashbacks and visions of the two every time a significant plot point occurs. In LoF's case it's a persistent and current plot point acting as the climax. Other devs who try to incorporate that kind of "tragedy" into their narrative seem to struggle with making it resonate with the audience, a feat that isn't as easy as it sounds.

 

[Sneak Monkey]

We all felt that way in the beginning (except for the few who see that MC as their spirit animal)... but just hang in there until chapter 1 and I promise he gets better.


I'd be down for a "tragic" tag to be added although it's rather rare that a dev is a skilled enough author to write a gut wrenching story well. Despite JPK dedicating little screen time to Ella and Maddy in the prologue he compensates for it by adding flashbacks and visions of the two every time a significant plot point occurs. In LoF's case it's a persistent and current plot point acting as the climax. Other devs who try to incorporate that kind of "tragedy" into their narrative seem to struggle with making it resonate with the audience, a feat that isn't as easy as it sounds.

Yeah, I definitely didn't hate him enough to wish that upon him... I guess even rich douchebags can find redemption and then get utterly crushed.

In terms of tragedy, that's actually a very specific type of story which has to end horribly, it can't start horribly, and it requires the protaganist to be the author of their own demise, not digging themselves out of despair. So it's unlikely this would get the tag if there was such a tag.

 

[meskuzi]

I'd be down for a "tragic" tag to be added although it's rather rare that a dev is a skilled enough author to write a gut wrenching story well. Despite JPK dedicating little screen time to Ella and Maddy in the prologue he compensates for it by adding flashbacks and visions of the two every time a significant plot point occurs. In LoF's case it's a persistent and current plot point acting as the climax. Other devs who try to incorporate that kind of "tragedy" into their narrative seem to struggle with making it resonate with the audience, a feat that isn't as easy as it sounds.

99.9% agreed! Thats why i'm gonna chase this title until "end".

 

[HungLow247]

Wow you did a really good job. Super impressive story writing. Great graphics with okay sex scenes. The sounds during the scenes could use a little touch up. Sucking sounds have an echo and one of sucking sounds clips. With it being so depressing it makes it really hard to rub one out though. Thanks for including a walk though , it helps a lot !