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alls i know is it a great game i love what coda is doing with it except i still wanna kill davewhat is new in this update??
it is the same as the last one wth??
Can someone explain to me what happend to the narration in the game later into the game? Did author suffer brain damage or something? Why the fuck do they write it like some stupid women's erotic novel? I don't uderstand half of it and it's in such contrast to anything that came before that. Almost seems like they just copy/paste passages from some books without thinking if they fit (or if those passages make any sense in the first place and aren't just a graphomaniacal outlet of some mad individual). Such a fucking disappointment. I was enjoying the game until the narration went insanely stupid.
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Losersriot
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Because it... women's erotic novel?
If you don't like women's novels, why don't you go and play... ALL other games on this site with a male protagonist ?
Question is why it was ok all the time prior to a certain point and went to shit after. I like female protagonist novels. But even those can be written in human language, like Our Red String from Eva Kiss. It started when she read that book of hers. First I thought it was on purpose, as sort of continuation of that book in her mind while she had sex with her bf, but when it continued the other day, the day of her graduation or what was that, then it was obviously a change in writing direction of the author and I don't understand why. That's all.Because it... women's erotic novel?
If you don't like women's novels, why don't you go and play... ALL other games on this site with a male protagonist ?
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I don't think that person even knows what the f they are talking about. At least in English. Maybe a poor translate.
Can you read? I mentioned twice it happened after a certain point in the story, to be precise after she returned home in the evening before her graduation party. To that point everything was fine. I'm not home right now, but when I get there I will post some examples from the game because it seems you two have problems understanding.
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bruh what kinda questions are you asking lol "can you read", if I didn't read or could not read, how would I respond?
And wtf are you talking about human language and shit, are you complaining about the grammar or English? If yes, this is a sexual visual novel bro not some English exam going on. Not everyone's first language is English, so at least appreciate the effort put in my the guys in doing stuff where they don't excel in instead of complaining about useless stuff
Man, you have to stop taking every word someone writes literally. Ok some quick example. This is some quote, I assume, that is placed in the game before one of the last bf scenes: "There is nothing so sexy as seeing a salacious young enchantress coming with her legs bent in a diamond shape, feet together, and one of those Hitachi camping flashlights, those Hitachi huge-eyes deep-sea exotic fishes, doing its blunt tireless thing in her Marianas Trench." I have no freaking idea what that means.bruh what kinda questions are you asking lol "can you read", if I didn't read or could not read, how would I respond?
And wtf are you talking about human language and shit, are you complaining about the grammar or English? If yes, this is a sexual visual novel bro not some English exam going on. Not everyone's first language is English, so at least appreciate the effort put in my the guys in doing stuff where they don't excel in instead of complaining about useless stuff
And most importantly have no idea why it's in a corruption porn game. That's what is alien language to me. But directly to the scene narration: "When she saw that he was dissolved with shock, she stopped, divining that perhaps if she depraved him now he might make a gesture towards fulfillment. At first, he made no motion, His love was quivering, and he was tormented with desire... Gail Grew desperate." Ok, this I at least understand, but have no idea why author tries to push the narration into the waters that it imo doesn't belong. It. Is. A. Porn. Game. FFS. "Very gently she lowered herself across the floor, crawling her way to him and making him feel the firm redhead and pale shaft plant itself in her body. A delicate green-tinted sap dribbled down her tender thighs." On the picture you see voluptuous woman crawling naked towards a guy with a gamepad in hands. And my favorite at the end: "With her riding atop him, looking like a soft, gigantic mushroom that had silently poked its face up through the dead leaves on the ground and opened under the sheltering wings of night. Her vagina felt warm and at the same time cold." Now I don't know how are the versions called here. I don't know where E1 ends and E2 starts, but in images folder of the game there are like 5 folders, latest has 0.6 version on it. By checking the pics in those folders I can tell you, writing was perfectly fine up to the version 0.5. It's only 0.6 that is written in the way I mentioned above. And I mention my point again - I don't know why to change it. Especially not when the new way of writting doesn't imo fit the game at all. If it was a romance novel I wouldn't really care (I wouldn't be playing it in the first place), but in a corruption game?
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Sorry but you lost me. Are you really complaining about the game because of your own shortcomings with the english language? Something that the developer has no control over?[...]
I have no freaking idea what that means.
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Losersriot
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Ah, whatever. I complain about writting in this game because IT WAS FINE ALL THE TIME BEFORE THAT and IT DOESN'T FIT THE GAME. My shortcomings in english language has very little to do with it. I don't like poetry for example. If you had a book written in prose and author later changed in whole into poetry, you probably wouldn't be too happy about it either. This is meaningless. You simply don't want to understand what I mean.Sorry but you lost me. Are you really complaining about the game because of your own shortcomings with the english language? Something that the developer has no control over?
Tags doesn't matter, it's still a game, where woman is cheating on bf with her boss, or is abused by him. As I mentioned before, be it romantic novel I really don't care, it would probably fit, but in this game it doesn't.The сorruption tag was a mistake. This tag is difficult to apply to the women's game
Ok, that's all that I will write. If you all are ok with this change of writting in the middle of the development of the game, if you enjoy reading such stuff, well, be my guests. For me it's just a shame to ruin potencially one of the best games out there by such writting. Peace.
which part in the game are you talking about. could you show some screen shots so we know better of what you are talking about ?