- Thread starter Gon D. Eser
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nope nope nope nope the scarlet NTR is to much
Wait what? There is no NTR tag!!!!
Edit: nevermind, I cant with the density of the mc.
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There is no ntr tag but there is also no incest tag so im getting the vibe that either the sister isn't really the mc sibling or that we will not be able to bang her at all which sucks
I actually liked the game, but the NTR plot ruined everything. Now I have zero interest in MC's sister if she's doing that voluntarily, and she definitely had sex with that fat guy because they were both sweaty in the pictures, and she even praises him, so she enjoyed it. That's the point where I'm giving up on the game. (Translated with Google)
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So far the only scene that might be ntr is with the sister and some old fat dude they might have banged which considering the sister is one of the main li it doesn't make a lot of sense story wise unless its a plot of some kind in order to get a item
Gon D, No need to apologize for the criticism. I keep going back to your game. The renders are very attractive, the story is engaging despite the language/translation barrier. You are doing well for a first game. Folks can be very harsh with their criticism based on what they expect for a better funded game and/or have never developed a game themselves. Keep up the good work, I'll be following your progress
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Does this game get better writing wise?
I'm just starting out really, but the writing seems a little cringey and annoying. between the MC's constant poor decision making and all the superfluous inner dialogue which usually doesn't add anything to the story, cutting away from battle scenes to follow people repeatedly having the same conversations like with Alice and her incessant need to apologise to every person she meets like it's some form of greeting and now where I'm up to the mc is currently trying to rape those two fox girls instead of just talking to them despite them obviously being made into slaves.
I'm finding this game geniunely difficult to engage with and more than a little frustrating. Is it worth sticking out for possible improvement or should I tap out now?
I'm just starting out really, but the writing seems a little cringey and annoying. between the MC's constant poor decision making and all the superfluous inner dialogue which usually doesn't add anything to the story, cutting away from battle scenes to follow people repeatedly having the same conversations like with Alice and her incessant need to apologise to every person she meets like it's some form of greeting and now where I'm up to the mc is currently trying to rape those two fox girls instead of just talking to them despite them obviously being made into slaves.
I'm finding this game geniunely difficult to engage with and more than a little frustrating. Is it worth sticking out for possible improvement or should I tap out now?