This one does not hang around, just gets right into it which can be a good thing but this goes too fast.
Too many events available at one time, need to spread the events out more across different times and days.
As others have stated, dialogue needs a lot of work
I must say, I enjoyed this because I found it comical how quickly he went from, oh I'm adopted and stay in a home with a bunch of beautiful women to pretty much most of the women wanting him.
Also, I'm thinking of my next VN and while doing so, I thought "If I did a story where MC stayed with his mum and 3 sisters, it definitely be popular but jeez, that feels like it be too crazy and totally out there". Due to that thought, I couldn't help but laugh when I saw this VN.
very curious to see how this one goes, but yeah, can't believe I'm saying this but the developer needs to slow down.