VN Ren'Py The President's Daughter [Ep.1] [Melissa Doll]

[SARBASST]

Please make the game the way you want and don't change tags to serve some people..

 

[MelissaDoll]

What was the point of giving the player choices if you're just going to take those choices away?

Player has the choices and each choice leads to consequences. Activate the tips to help you following the right path

 

[MelissaDoll]

Please make the game the way you want and don't change tags to serve some people..

Exactly! I won’t be changing the tags, as I already have a clear plan in mind. Thank you for your consideration!

 

[submissive -Ben83]

Thanks. I wish you all the best!

Thank you


Maybe after quite afew updates in i may push myself to play but yeah no right now

 

[JaszMan]

yeesh if I was Emily I would find a way to runaway even join Father's enemies for payback. Getting out by being smart playing along until the opportune moment to escape these Psychopaths

 

[aser61]

perfectoo

 

[MelissaDoll]

yeesh if I was Emily I would find a way to runaway even join Father's enemies for payback. Getting out by being smart playing along until the opportune moment to escape these Psychopaths

That's maybe what she plans to do, who knows?
Though being in the middle of the wolves' den is probably better to help take out the entire pack.

 

[JEER0X]

Just think about it for a second: she has no power, no strength, no allies, no money. Then a shady guy with a prominent role shows up and says, "Obey or else..." (and look as how the maid is afraid of him)
In real life, as a girl, would you just say "F** off"*? I don't think so. But you can build up your power/your strength bit by bit so you never have to say "yes" again.
That’s how I experienced and see the world — and that’s the perspective I want to reflect in this game’s story.

And she doesn’t acknowledge him as her master — she just lies to get through. It is also shown in the game after you chose this decision. (maybe I could add another option for the dom path, something like "Yes (lie)")

I kind of wish she would of endured the torture instead of submitting i mean even if Sleepy joe doesn't like his daughters attitude i doubt he would kill her or seriously damage her or maybe he would?

 

[Buffalo Fred]

Exactly! I won’t be changing the tags, as I already have a clear plan in mind. Thank you for your consideration!

Yeah don't get disheartened by a few aggressive posters that want things a very specific way, the way you're portraying MC so far is pretty realistic.
I'm honestly surprised that people don't see the obvious long term plotting the MC is doing in regards to getting payback.
Am usually not into Femdom but so far the game is doing a good job in making me root for the MC getting some sweet revenge.

 

[TonyMurray]

Okay, my quick(ish) thoughts:

I'm going to ignore the key story elements that are a bit outlandish (the president stuff, how the household works, the punishment of his daughter, etc.) because without those, you don't have the basis for the game - suspension of disbelief is definitely required here, but that's not a bad thing.

The renders mostly look good, although I found Cat looked just a bit weird sometimes (I think it's the mouth, the eyes, or the combination of both). The FMC, Emily, is gorgeous though. The choices are absolutely fine, and for those who want the help, there's a "tips" option in the preferences menu. Although there are two main paths noted, already there are a few divergences and I nearly ended up with four saves from my first playthrough (Dom-Cat slave, Dom-Cat friend, Sub, and Dom to Sub/Dungeon). This gives some good possibilities going forwards.

The other main thing I appreciate, going along with that initial little bit of replayability, is that this is different to so many of the new releases recently that are just five-minute wonders (if that). There's a reasonable size to the first release - it's not going to take hours to get through, but it's enough to give you an idea of what to expect, and to start setting things up for what's to come.

 

[TomUK]

yeesh if I was Emily I would find a way to runaway even join Father's enemies for payback. Getting out by being smart playing along until the opportune moment to escape these Psychopaths

I think I would have fucked him up right from the start and walked into the press room naked and told the media what her father just did to her.

 

[MelissaDoll]

I think I would have fucked him up right from the start and walked into the press room naked and told the media what her father just did to her.

Easier said than done. You’re forgetting a few key things:
- The bodyguards
- The difference in strength (just one serious hit from her father could knock her out)
- The emotional state she’s in at the beginning of the story
- The influence her father holds—not just over her, but over everyone around her

In a realistic "powerful" environment, things like that don’t happen so easily.
Just look at real-world examples: abuse and scandals involving powerful figures are often buried for years. Victims are silenced by fear, influence, or control. Even in cases like Epstein’s, Weinstein’s, Abbé Pierre's... it took immense pressure and time for the truth to surface.

 

[MelissaDoll]

I kind of wish she would of endured the torture instead of submitting i mean even if Sleepy joe doesn't like his daughters attitude i doubt he would kill her or seriously damage her or maybe he would?

Just for the record, it’s not ‘Sleepy Joe’ and was never intended to be. I created his face by blending features from multiple characters (at least three) to look like a generic old president-type guy.
It’s mainly the hairstyle that gives that impression, but it’s not him.

Who knows what a crazy human could do at some point?!

 

[Power Broker]

Good game start, I like it so far and the hints make sure that you can stay on your preferred path. Some nitpicks:

When the president took away all her clothes, he lets her keep her (ugly) panties. It seems inconsequential to do so if he wants to make the point that everything belongs to him and she has to earn everything. She should have been completely naked.
Similar thoughts ocurred when she got the maid dress from the kind maid: why should this be allowed if she has to earn everything? Giving away freebies like this somehow tarnishes the basic idea of her rough downfall, losing everything and having to earn everything.
When she was whipped by her childhood friend, she still wore her dress. Aside from the danger of "ripping" it. the first thing I'd expect would be that she has to bare her ass, so nothing softens the blow.

Since the game aims at intrigues and probably a revenge plot: will there be a way for the main character to lose?
And, also: what kind of "love interests" (or abusers) can we expect? I like to read about (dominant, younger) boy / (submissive) women dynamics and I'd be interested to know if something like this is planned.

 

[edcl58]

Not nearly enough content for a review

 

[MelissaDoll]

because typical dev is mommy's dweller incel. He dont know what is it - romance. Loser.

Tone and Language

• Aggressive and derogatory: The message relies heavily on insults (“mommy’s dweller,” “incel,” “loser”)—terms often used to stereotype or dehumanize.
• Poor grammar and casual syntax: Suggests impulsivity or an intentional attempt to sound dismissive and superior.
• Dismissive tone: Indicates a lack of interest in engaging in constructive or meaningful dialogue.

Likely Psychological Traits

1. Frustration and insecurity:
   The use of personal attacks often reflects the speaker’s own unresolved frustrations or a desire to deflect from their own insecurities.
2. Need for dominance or superiority:
   By belittling others, the subject seeks to assert control or boost their own self-image—especially through comparison.
3. Low emotional intelligence:
   The lack of empathy, inability to consider context, and reduction of complex topics (like romance or personality) to stereotypes may signal emotional immaturity.
4. Possible trolling behavior:
   The exaggerated and provocative phrasing might not reflect a sincere opinion, but rather an attempt to provoke reactions (edgelord or shitposting behavior).

Sometimes AI is helpful for better understanding certain human behaviors. Thanks for helping me learn more!

 

[MelissaDoll]

Good game start, I like it so far and the hints make sure that you can stay on your preferred path. Some nitpicks:

When the president took away all her clothes, he lets her keep her (ugly) panties. It seems inconsequential to do so if he wants to make the point that everything belongs to him and she has to earn everything. She should have been completely naked.
Similar thoughts ocurred when she got the maid dress from the kind maid: why should this be allowed if she has to earn everything? Giving away freebies like this somehow tarnishes the basic idea of her rough downfall, losing everything and having to earn everything.
When she was whipped by her childhood friend, she still wore her dress. Aside from the danger of "ripping" it. the first thing I'd expect would be that she has to bare her ass, so nothing softens the blow.

Since the game aims at intrigues and probably a revenge plot: will there be a way for the main character to lose?
And, also: what kind of "love interests" (or abusers) can we expect? I like to read about (dominant, younger) boy / (submissive) women dynamics and I'd be interested to know if something like this is planned.

Thanks!

1. When the president takes away all her clothes, it’s intentional that he leaves her in her panties — he doesn’t want to completely break her. He still hopes she learns a serious lesson. This also explains his behavior in the limousine at the end of the episode: if she dominated her friend, he’s somewhat proud of her progress.
2. Regarding the maid outfit: you have to start somewhere. She’s still his daughter, and he doesn’t want her to completely spiral — he just wants her to stop being a pain and finally understand who she really is and what her role should be. For him, there’s nothing lower than a maid, so it makes sense. And by starting this low she will learn to like what she had and understand what he has made for her so far.
3. You’re right about that last point. I simply wanted to avoid having her do anything dominant or sexual while nude too early in the story.

 

[ffive]

Hmm the choices seem rather imbalanced, with some apparent bias towards keeping the protagonist on the submissive path if she gets there. E.g. when you have a scene with childhood friend with Dominant Emily, you get choices to dominate further or de-escalate the situation, but if Emily enters this scene as submissive, she doesn't get any choice whether to fold or to push back and stand up for herself even if it's just another girl, one clearly unhinged and not someone Emily respects or fears in the least.

The really silly part is this can be potentially decided by single previous decision not to be an asshole to the other maid ("Let it go" when asked for forgiveness instead of "Don't let it go") which automagically renders Emily submissive and willing to take whatever abuse gets thrown her way, including physical beating.

edit: to follow up, i think it may be a mistake to have MC have a single, automatically selected attitude based on all previous choices. This approach doesn't take into account that Emily would quite naturally vary her approach towards different people, based on what power/threat/opportunity they represent as well as their personalities. Just because she opted to lie to the butler about bowing down and was nice to a girl she gets to work with doesn't mean she wouldn't be willing to bare her teeth at someone who is neither of those two people (or even one of those two people) depending on circumstances. At the very least, tracking attitude per-person could be a welcome improvement.

 

[JaszMan]

Easier said than done. You’re forgetting a few key things:
- The bodyguards
- The difference in strength (just one serious hit from her father could knock her out)
- The emotional state she’s in at the beginning of the story
- The influence her father holds—not just over her, but over everyone around her

In a realistic "powerful" environment, things like that don’t happen so easily.
Just look at real-world examples: abuse and scandals involving powerful figures are often buried for years. Victims are silenced by fear, influence, or control. Even in cases like Epstein’s, Weinstein’s, Abbé Pierre's... it took immense pressure and time for the truth to surface.

which is why I Say play it smart play along while still actually waiting to make her move, not fully being submissive but tricking most of the Psychopaths while keeping her Dominance, taking a bit of advice from Sofia. Become a Viper, yet at the same time do not let the other Vipers notice too much, have them drop their guard making them think she is just a mouse until Boom the Young Predator Strikes out of the blue. I put Catalina in her place that way, satisfying to see Psychopaths shocked and surprised when the tables are turned. Eventually She finds a way out, joins Daddy's enemies and takes him down.

 

[Badboll]

So lets say daddy dearest dies and she inherits everything. What do these "servants" think would happen if they treat her the way they are doing. I'd get it if it was a step mom scenario and the dad was just so busy and didn't care enough to notice. But the dad himself doing it seems crazy. Anyone who wants to take him down all they have to do is record what he's doing to his daughter and leak it on the internet and he's done. He's not really treating anyone else well either.
I wonder what this marriage route will be though. Forced marriages are usually never written well in porn games.
depending on who she would get married to I would assume it would be better than being with her dad.
But knowing these kinds of games, every male character is horrible just to be horrible. Which is fine I guess. Completely predictable but oh well.