VN Ren'Py The President's Daughter [Ep.1] [Melissa Doll]

[Kpopn00dcoverlover]

Some really interesting thoughts in there!
First of all, thanks a lot for taking the time to write such detailed feedback.

I’m not sure yet if I’ll implement any of the ideas you suggested, but if I do, I’ll definitely make sure to credit you. Though I like your way of thinking!
For now, I’ll continue (focus) on the story as planned and see later on if adding scenes like these or modifying some of them could help make the narrative flow more smoothly.

Got it for the typo, I will fix this!

Thanks again!

love the concept and the idea. i'm a little concerned about how the 2 paths will be implemented tho. especially since i'm really not looking at playing a game where i make her into a crime boss queen. those games already exist, and i find them boring.

so i guess we will see.

 

[Knight_of_the_lance]

Wow, really? I’m not American and don’t follow U.S. politics closely, so I didn’t even know he lost his first wife. Yeah, that’s definitely an unfortunate parallel I hadn’t intended!

I'm not american either, but their politics impact my country a lot so I follow what is happening over there closely, perhaps more closely than necessary.


On the subject of letting slide the maids remark. I agree that letting it slide should not prevent Emily from having an over all dominant behavior. It could bar the choice to punish the childhood friend but not the one to start over with her . Anyways, I am not privy to your plans so it might eventually make sens to not allow Emily to relax her dominant behavior in that particular case. Something to think about. Having to many diverging paths might be an issue eventually too if not kept in check.

 

[ffive]

It could bar the choice to punish the childhood friend but not the one to start over with her .

At the simplest level, there could be partial overlap between the paths in that scene:

* dominant Emily: automatically push back, choose between dominating further or attempt to be friends
* submissive Emily: choice between submission or push back. If the latter was picked, automatically attempt to be friends after Emily stops the assault.

You have the same three outcomes (submit, play nice, dominate) but some (and similar) level of control in both scenarios rather than be kept on submissive path with no option to claw your way back.

 

[Power Broker]

Chapter I is called "The New Maid" when it rapidly becomes obvious that they are not the new maid and that they've been lying to the President for most of a week (or a week, or more than a week) to protect the President's daughter.

Just a hint: (imho) "The new maid" does not refer to the character named maid. Also, it's singular, it only refers to one person.

 

[Elentija]

It is an original song created for the game yes

Its a good song! Bravo to the composer.

 

[Sunedosa]

I honestly think the Epstein files are real, but there are people from all sides involved — so no one has any interest in seeing them go public.
People who think only one side has ugly things to hide are being very naive.

Mmmh, you just gave me an idea. Maybe I should include a reference to it in the game at some point?

Yea i think the same, i don't like how Trump is trying to make it go away however, actively pushing rep influencers like Charlie Kirk not to make a fuss and they're actually doing just that. People from both sides has things they want to hide as you say, including Trump himself. Time will tell what/if anything will happen.

 

[slavegal]

I honestly think the Epstein files are real, but there are people from all sides involved — so no one has any interest in seeing them go public.
People who think only one side has ugly things to hide are being very naive.

Mmmh, you just gave me an idea. Maybe I should include a reference to it in the game at some point?

I heard that Epstein died suspiciously at last. Is that true? I am not from the US, everything I heard about it was pretty vague.

 

[Rake Tyler]

One thing I found funny in this game is the president's appearance, which I thought was a mix of Trump and Biden

 

[stella vermillion]

 

[ffive]

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"Old white dudes look all the same, news at 11"

 

[stella vermillion]

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"Old white dudes look all the same, news at 11"

very soon it will be donald trump

 

[ffive]

very soon it will be donald trump

He'll probably avoid the comparison thanks to being more of an orange man.

 

[J0K3RXXX]

It looks promising.

 

[MentisVecors]

Really good game, but I was really confused on why the dev gave us an option to become dominant only to loose all the points in the head butler scene

Yes, this option is weak, your protagonist wants to make a dominant and self-confident! But being ruined by small power possessed cocks!!!

 

[Dealbreaker]

Is he sniffing her hair?

 

[Assiemodis]

Yes, this option is weak, your protagonist wants to make a dominant and self-confident! But being ruined by small power possessed cocks!!!

When going on dominant path choose all options dominant except against "master" choose here the easy way to not loose points and get dominant perk

 

[Randy77]

Love it, great start, That maid steals the show for me

 

[bamachine]

I am going full on domme with her. Really hopes she gets to put Jon is a gimp suit and hang him by his testicles, inside the jail cell she puts her father in, after she unseats him, becoming the first female President.

While I am not a feminist, as a dude, I am all about equal rights and hate seeing those in power abusing those not as fortunate or those considered "weaker".

Also, by going full domme, I got to see little miss naughty's naughty bits.

 

[bamachine]

When going on dominant path choose all options dominant except against "master" choose here the easy way to not loose points and get dominant perk

Yeah, there she is pretending to go along with the plan, as evidenced as soon as the Buttface, er Butler, walks away.

 

[L7Bear]

[Presidential pics]

caption: "British politics in all its diversity on display this morning"

alternatively:


Personally, I think the President in this game looks like a generic "old white male politician" and the sort of character/caricature common in GTA and other half-satire games like that.