VN Ren'Py Completed The Professor [v3.4] [Pixieblink]

[sho1223]

Alright, I've made it through.

Basics: Dude buys mind control vr thing from commercial from a super villain (lol writing). He trains a woman who has alcoholism into not being an alcoholic and instead his sex slave and he trains a pair of women who were training for a stripper olympics event (though they have to be brainwashed to strip bizarrely in addition to becoming sex slaves).

Pros:
There's a decent amount of content in there for a "first" release. I'd estimate 5 or 6 training scenes for a single girl and a pair of girls each. They both top out at blowjob for now. I say "first" because his first patreon post says he's moved to patreon so lord only knows what platform he used before now.
He has actually put a ton of animations in. All of the hypnosis and trainings are all in the form of animations.

Cons:
The art is 3DXXXWorld level bad. Not sure why you'd not just get Honeyselect or some other engine because I don't think they're that hard to wrangle for 1000x better images and animations. Maybe because this program can be rendered on a laptop from 2004?
The writing while playing to a very simple fantasy has problems. I think a lot of amateur game devs try to make the Skyrim of porn games first and burn out so I don't really mind, 1. you get mind control device, 2. you find struggling girl tropes for ease of premise. However mind control tends to require... control. The first girl's training is bizarrely structured. She is still getting drunk at the school by the 5th training. Part of this is because it seems like she's the hook for another woman (a teacher who follows to catch you doing shady shit), but man it felt like he was hypnotizing her, only for her to go to his house for free booze and stop the second she gets it. It really felt like she didn't get hypnotized and just was like "I'll show up for him to give me free booze and suck him off, sure." Even if you're ok with a hokey premise, this sort of fucks up the simple fantasy it aims for because the mind control doesn't feel like it sticks.
I prefer static images, but that's my preference.

 

[Cmann]

There's always room for improvements ...

When the quality of the (?)renders are on par with stock Source Filmmaker, has constant clipping, facial expressions that ride the uncanny valley like a roller-coaster, inconsistent lighting (... you get the point) - Of course there's room for improvement, its hard to go lower.

Which is a shame, the description and some of the pictures in OP piqued my interest at least.

 

[botc76]

Nope. Just nope.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

I don't have anything nice to say so I won't say anything.

 

[CptRexx]

It looks like Nazis' are trying new things on woman.

 

[Agent HK47]

How I imagine everyone brave enough to play this game after watching the previews:

 

[meigame]

I'm all good with creepy molesty, rapey shit but does it have to be this ugly?

So I'm gonna jump on the grenade and play it... 2+gigs? and this ugly? nope.

 

[myuhinny]

I have to say I'm not into turds with lip stick not to mention they look like a mummy and that girl also not worth looking at so I'm passing and hiding thread.

 

[Deleted member 229118]

An other mind control game an other disappointment.
Is it too much to ask for a good mind control games?

Also insert the same complaint as everyone else about freaks of nature looks here.
If i wanted to see ugly i go look at real woman.

 

[Inmortaliity]

 

[rKnight]

OH SH*T! I swear to God that a floating dick would do a better job than this MC.

 

[salty_croissant]

I think i got optical cancer

 

[Flecc]

Despite the samples i had a look at it. I went in with an open mind and here are my thoughts

!st off i would like to thank you for trying to put something together its not easy and without adult game devs there is no adult game community.
However with this game i was thoroughly bored after 15 min of play their was just nothing their that hooked me to play the game any longer.The dialogue is at best poor,The Actions repetitive,and the Renders were poor.Though the animation with the right sort of models could work .

In my opinion though you either need to shelve this and start again or Rework the dialogue and the renders before moving forward with it .Especially if you are looking for people to pledge your patreon i don't think you are going to get much interest in its current state


I wish you success for the future

but in it's current state not for me I'm afraid

 

[DrGrigor]

Is the college at africa?

 

[batman666]

That's fucking weird.

 

[ThunderRob]

And on this day..Rob did NOT Porn Testdummy....

 

[TeamHentaiX]

ok so i finished the game and..............I WANT MORE!!! hahaha i dont know what yall complaining about, this game is my kind of game, so yeah ima wait for more episodes

 

[Dependable_223]

Sounds like mindlos gone bad from the gift reloaded.. he even looks like him ..

 

[Kalios1980]

i will never play that its so creepy.....

 

[darkwolf0x]

When the quality of the (?)renders are on par with stock Source Filmmaker, has constant clipping, facial expressions that ride the uncanny valley like a roller-coaster, inconsistent lighting (... you get the point) - Of course there's room for improvement, its hard to go lower.

Which is a shame, the description and some of the pictures in OP piqued my interest at least.

I don't know they could always go flip book lol