Ah yes, pregnancy is a huge fetish of mine but there are huge problems with it plot wise. Where do all the babies go? Why is MC not taking care off them? All children deserve a parent, not all parents deserve a child. Maybe for the ending and/or secondary characters.
Totally looking forward to that.Futa and Drow? Fuck yeah...
As others have said, make the game that you want to make (nothing else matters). Once this thread grows in size you will start seeing people post stuff like "wtf is futa? yuck!" or "what a waste, no thanks", ignore those people, they are posting that stuff just to rile you up (do not give them the time of day)...
Aye, plenty of people mention that. I will make sure to release chapter 2 in a more readable format. Any pointer on the matter is greatly appriciated
That's fine by me. Maybe impregnation only in the story and the rest for epilogue or something? Also as a Crusader Kings III player bloodline must be kept pure! If you catch my meaning ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Right there, I guess it's a cross line somewhere between where the book ends and "game" starts? Judging by the choices given to the player at Ch.1
I suggest separating your paragraphs as well. Makes it easier to read as compared to having a continuous wall of text from top to bottom. Another thing to consider; a save feature at some point, maybe when there's more content (and paths) to justify it. These HTML games usually have a side-bar with a bunch of functionalities (New game, save/load, options, etc) and I was a bit lost when I couldn't find it.Aye, plenty of people mention that. I will make sure to release chapter 2 in a more readable format. Any pointer on the matter is greatly appriciated
Ah that! Yes, I think/thought that is the conventional name of this format in the English language. In Italian we just call them "libri game", a bit of a lost in translation
Yep, both are widely requested features and both will be implemented when I'll release chapter 2. What do you think is the sweet spot for the size of a single paragraph? Thanks, mate!
Most of the line changes you have there are good enough, just need to add a space between them and the next paragraph. A good rule of thumb is to limit paragraphs to 6-8 lines of text. Smaller are fine but having a bazillion paragraphs that are just 2 lines each can get annoying too. The sweet spot for me tends to be 4-6, but you can go for 8 if the continuity makes sense. In other words, your mileage may vary. (For the record, this is on PC. Phone users may have a different preference).
Errr... I assume a passage is basically a section of text (could be one paragraph or more) dedicated to a particular topic or subject, correct? (Sorry, I'm not a native english speaker so I had to google it. I know some terms when it comes to writing but others elude me.) From what I've gathered, there are short passages and long ones. The former can be as simple as a single sentence whereas the latter can be as long as 4-9 paragraphs.*
Neither am I. I myself get confused sometimes. In this specific case by "passage" I meant the equivalent of a page. I'm trying to determine the ideal amount of text between one click and the other.
Hmm... I thought the pages were a bit long but that may have been just because of the way the text was formatted. Walls of text always look worse than what they actually are, however, while these changes will make reading easier, it will also increase the page length.
We'll see if the DM allows that. Seriusly though, pregnancy will most likely be present, also keep in mind that elven kin pregnancy lasts ten years.
