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Not the first to mention this, but it's a pretty sizeable problem. A lot of the best content is hidden by the dialogue box:
There is so much wrong with this contract, but I'm just going to mention a few things:
1) It lists the name of the client. That's a HUGE MASSIVE NO-NO. There is no reason the assassin should need to know who is paying for this hit.
2) The "target" is Ekaterina Ivanov, but the "objective" describes the killing of Mikhail Ivanov. So, which one are they supposed to eliminate?
3) The binding arbitration clause is ridiculous. If the assassin doesn't perform the contract, they either don't get paid or they get a bullet in the back of the head. It's not a *legal* contract. It's not like "Oh, you can't go to the court system, because you're contractually obligated to use my arbitrator" is something that would ever happen in a situation like this.
Is Eugene supposed to be talking to himself? 'cause it really seems like someone else should be talking in one of those lines.
You can't go right - it just returns you to this menu until you go left.
What was the point of that?
Some of the text got cut off by the unnecessarily large book of options.
It seems like you have a decent writer, a decent graphic artist, and a decent coder... but they're not working together and no one is checking the final product.
There is so much wrong with this contract, but I'm just going to mention a few things:
1) It lists the name of the client. That's a HUGE MASSIVE NO-NO. There is no reason the assassin should need to know who is paying for this hit.
2) The "target" is Ekaterina Ivanov, but the "objective" describes the killing of Mikhail Ivanov. So, which one are they supposed to eliminate?
3) The binding arbitration clause is ridiculous. If the assassin doesn't perform the contract, they either don't get paid or they get a bullet in the back of the head. It's not a *legal* contract. It's not like "Oh, you can't go to the court system, because you're contractually obligated to use my arbitrator" is something that would ever happen in a situation like this.
Is Eugene supposed to be talking to himself? 'cause it really seems like someone else should be talking in one of those lines.
You can't go right - it just returns you to this menu until you go left.
What was the point of that?
Some of the text got cut off by the unnecessarily large book of options.
It seems like you have a decent writer, a decent graphic artist, and a decent coder... but they're not working together and no one is checking the final product.
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