VN Ren'Py The Reaper's Rapture [v0.01] [SensMrLove]

[SensMrLove]

Not the first to mention this, but it's a pretty sizeable problem. A lot of the best content is hidden by the dialogue box:
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There is so much wrong with this contract, but I'm just going to mention a few things:
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1) It lists the name of the client. That's a HUGE MASSIVE NO-NO. There is no reason the assassin should need to know who is paying for this hit.
2) The "target" is Ekaterina Ivanov, but the "objective" describes the killing of Mikhail Ivanov. So, which one are they supposed to eliminate?
3) The binding arbitration clause is ridiculous. If the assassin doesn't perform the contract, they either don't get paid or they get a bullet in the back of the head. It's not a *legal* contract. It's not like "Oh, you can't go to the court system, because you're contractually obligated to use my arbitrator" is something that would ever happen in a situation like this.

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Is Eugene supposed to be talking to himself? 'cause it really seems like someone else should be talking in one of those lines.

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You can't go right - it just returns you to this menu until you go left.
What was the point of that?

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Some of the text got cut off by the unnecessarily large book of options.

It seems like you have a decent writer, a decent graphic artist, and a decent coder... but they're not working together and no one is checking the final product.

Thanks so much for your constructive criticism. Seriously, I appreciate it! Most people don't point out mistakes, which leaves them unchecked, so I'm grateful you did. I’ve already made all the fixes you mentioned after reading your comment. In the next update (not sure when it'll drop yet), those corrections will be included, along with a major rewrite of some dialogues and monologues. Plus, I'll be giving a sneak peek of what's coming next!

 

[nuclearbomb]

Interesting, I am all in on dark and twisted games but will wait until the next update before I give it a go, since it seems like dev will make some (By looking at the comments) needed changes.

 

[goulet1995]

Thanks so much for your constructive criticism. Seriously, I appreciate it! Most people don't point out mistakes, which leaves them unchecked, so I'm grateful you did. I’ve already made all the fixes you mentioned after reading your comment. In the next update (not sure when it'll drop yet), those corrections will be included, along with a major rewrite of some dialogues and monologues. Plus, I'll be giving a sneak peek of what's coming next!

will lesbian, multiple penetration, beastiality and prostitution be avoidable?

 

[SensMrLove]

will lesbian, multiple penetration, beastiality and prostitution be avoidable?

Lesbian = avoidable
Multiple penetration = avoidable
Beastiality = avoidable
Prostitution = avoidable

Keep in mind, though, that skipping a significant portion of the content will leave you with much less to experience.

 

[goulet1995]

Lesbian = avoidable
Multiple penetration = avoidable
Beastiality = avoidable
Prostitution = avoidable

Keep in mind, though, that skipping a significant portion of the content will leave you with much less to experience.

im fine with missing that type of content tbh as long as story still make sense. To avoid any of those is there certain LI's that need to be avoided orcan you go with a full harem and still avoid these. Also with lesbian does that include in group scenes that it can be avoided?

 

[Azriel55]

Interesting game, but the text bar takes up too much real estate and covers up too much. It needs to be shrunk down.

 

[Echoesinthedarkness]

I must say tags are looking very tasty, I'll be looking forward for next update

 

[Kolkolo45]

Android versión?