VN Ren'Py The Rest of Our Lives [v0.2.09c] [Giandalf The Tall]

[Amebaonline8]

So there's no more humiliation for the MC?
The LIs aren't constantly talking about their ex-boyfriends' cocks anymore?
The MC doesn't have to share anymore?
And the most important thing is, will it have a harem ending or not?

Did not see any of that.

 

[Ferdinand321]

So there's no more humiliation for the MC?
The LIs aren't constantly talking about their ex-boyfriends' cocks anymore?
The MC doesn't have to share anymore?
And the most important thing is, will it have a harem ending or not?

Now the MC has an inferiority complex and keeps asking if his dick isn't too small for the girls and they reply that size isn't everything but his dick is fat and that's a good thing, seriously, it's laughing so you don't cry about it.

 

[TKdropemoff]

Now the MC has an inferiority complex and keeps asking if his dick isn't too small for the girls and they reply that size isn't everything but his dick is fat and that's a good thing, seriously, it's laughing so you don't cry about it.

dev gotta be trolling at this point.

 

[RpWolf]

So there's no more humiliation for the MC?
The LIs aren't constantly talking about their ex-boyfriends' cocks anymore?
The MC doesn't have to share anymore?
And the most important thing is, will it have a harem ending or not?

Actually, not much has changed. Norah, for example, only the dialogue about her having sex with "Jackhammer Fynn" was removed, but if she still had a boyfriend, she still had sex with him, it's just not said anymore, so it's still the same shit.

 

[HX_Eros]

I'm loving the soundtrack and I enjoy a slow-burn of a VN.

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[SafeForSure]

Looks nice but forced Norah is a huge turn off. Forced Lis are really annoying.

 

[LordWanze]

Yeah nah that was disgusting.
Didn't need to read the encyclopedia about Emiliys spanking adventures. And don't want to be anywhere near that used-up pussy.
Forced LI, not a virgin, completely unnecessary.
The monologues of the MC are endless.
And how the hell is he dumb enough to believe this atrocious suicide-bs?

Dev: it's early enough.
Your LIs look awesome. The story is jarring but serves the purpose well enough.
Since you fucked up so bad with the dialogue: make them virgins.
Neighbour waited for MC, Emily was grossed out of men because of the father, Brighton is young and eager to experiment.
Cut about 80% of the monologues and focus on actual events with pictures. Talk about the abuse of Emily? Don't call it spanking, he hit her, she had enough, she fled. Done.

Just my suggestions tho, it is your game. But I see abandoned-signs all over it.