Finished my playthrough now, and although there were some parts (perhaps too many parts) that I thought were a bit slow, I enjoyed it overall. The graphics look great, and there are some really nice women here that I hope we get to see plenty more of. The story definitely has me intrigued!
When I played the previous update, I did notice a fair few technical errors in the writing, with some Russian remaining in the dialogue and Laura's name being changed to "Lora" a few times, with one exception that I found (in the spoilers) these have been taken care of now. There are still a few typos here and there, and some funny little translation mishaps, but otherwise it's mostly fine in that sense now.
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Frxnz below: