- Thread starter DarkWolf2055
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- Jan 31, 2019
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If this game get's taken down, you could always put it up on "All the Fallen.moe" (remove the spaces)
- Jun 23, 2017
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This REALLY needs proofreading... English isn't even my native/main language and the fact that they are using he/him instead of she/her (among other things) is triggering me to the highest point.
Also, funny how people are going to complain about loli content in a loli tagged game... lol please
Also, funny how people are going to complain about loli content in a loli tagged game... lol please
- Jul 10, 2017
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Poster gurl .. I need no other babe .. she be gorgeous.
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She looks cute to me
Game oN!
- Dec 27, 2017
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Note to developer: You can patch the incest content and get around the Patreon rules, but ANY sexual content with those underage girls (regardless of their relationship to the MC) will get you slapped down by Patreon. Getting this game transferred to SubscribeStar is highly recommended. You can still keep a toned-down version (without sex with the lolis) on Patreon.
- Mar 1, 2020
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It's an error with whatever machine translator they used, I've seen it a couple times. The thing is just like "ah, [pronoun] yes this is good, any one will do"
- Nov 15, 2019
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Another attempt to make a novel with loli and incest? Hm... It looks pretty intriguing. I definitely wish success to the author and also advise you to make an account in the SS . I hope this project will live on the site longer than ProudFather, and he will have at least as many ambitions.
Hm... It looks pretty intriguing. I definitely wish success to the author and also advise you to make an account in the SS . I hope this project will live on the site longer than ProudFather, and he will have at least as many ambitions.
- Apr 24, 2020
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OK couple of things, at least for as longs as they will allow the game to be here. Like what others people have said English needs allot of work, Looks like a strait up AI translation from a crappy translation program. also No one says Hello friend to a friend, they either call them by there name or a nickname, makes the hole thing allot more natural, my recommendation would be ask an acual english speaking person, one that lives in a English speaking country that knows the slang to redo the English text/story telling, graphics look great though, So for as long as it will he allowed on here.. Good luck Dev
- Mar 31, 2020
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i'd prefer the IC patch to make the milf a mom not wife.
there is a huge chance that patreon will ban you for the underage girls you should take the game to another site.
anyway good luck dev i'll keep an eye on this game
there is a huge chance that patreon will ban you for the underage girls you should take the game to another site.
anyway good luck dev i'll keep an eye on this game
- May 9, 2018
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Aside from the fact the English dialog could use a huge makeover, the character definition could be improved upon as well.
Ex:
sis
sister
bro
brother
dad
daddy
father
Use alternates from time to time instead of the same thing over and over. It makes for better reading. An example of this would be:
"Yeah, sis. I'm glad you're finally back".
"She is my sister".
"I am his sister".
"It's so good to see you, bro".
"He is my brother".
"I am her brother".
Granted the last five aren't in the scripts, but that's just to give you a general idea on how to improve the character definition a bit better.
Ex:
sis
sister
bro
brother
dad
daddy
father
Use alternates from time to time instead of the same thing over and over. It makes for better reading. An example of this would be:
"Yeah, sis. I'm glad you're finally back".
"She is my sister".
"I am his sister".
"It's so good to see you, bro".
"He is my brother".
"I am her brother".
Granted the last five aren't in the scripts, but that's just to give you a general idea on how to improve the character definition a bit better.
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- Nov 4, 2018
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The best ones get banned unless its loli content gets removed,
and added to a patch that's hosted on lucky patcher.
Niko Hime and Westy are loli heros
- Apr 15, 2018
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- Dec 5, 2017
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You need to make a loli patch, because thanks to some stupid people, this thread will be locked and your Patreon account will be taken down.
The only way to get around that is to make a patch that enables those features and is in another link (for example, a lewpatcher link)
The only way to get around that is to make a patch that enables those features and is in another link (for example, a lewpatcher link)
can you then wright the link to me privately on my profile or something?
- Jul 13, 2018
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You know what? I'll try it. There's a certain tag that has me a little weary but I'll play for the culture.