Unity Abandoned The Secret of Hokwiton [v0.4.0] [AlpineBiscuits]

[Spermasahne]

Needs some sound options to lower the god damn loud voices/sound effects.
Also someone of that teachers got a black font for their name, maybe put a white outline to it.
Also you should be able to hide the textbox anytime, for better viewing pleasure ;D

 

[Gudil]

Not such a big deal. I made a quick and dirty android build. It ran well on my phone during a very short test, but since the game has point and click elements where the mouse pointer changes when you move over something inter-actable, which of course is not working on the phone, I don't recommend using it and will not officially support it.

Anyway here you go: pixeldrain

To build on IOS, I think I would need a Mac, so I can't help you with that.

Thank you, at least I'll have a taste of the game.

 

[Grandy_UiD]

EVERYONE is Nova Connell.

 

[gramaton]

this game will be abandoned in no time

 

[test_125]

It´s a very good start. If you keep going and improve the UI, you'll get a great game.

Also, try to offer more options to the user, and keep tracking of them.

Remember to make the game for you, that's the way to make a very good game. Listen to your users, but keep your soul in the game.

 

[William Bodd]

Surprised at some of the negative comments. In terrms of visuals and story this game is far better than 95% of games on this site.
I agree the UI needs much improvement (suggest RenPY) but the writing is really good as well. May need English proofing. The only other thing I noticed was that certain lessons are mis-named. Cant wait for the next update.
Well done!

 

[Valmora]

Yea, this thing needs a major rework... saves bug out, not able to save. it's perma in window mode and wont full-screen or maximize. no ability to scroll back. the text has no instant, refer back to EVERY other VN with options...
the dialogue needs work.
do the models look good, yea, sure they do...

but with all the rest of the nonfunctional crap, not worth bothering with...

 

[Spermasahne]

Yea, this thing needs a major rework... saves bug out, not able to save. it's perma in window mode and wont full-screen or maximize.

ALT+ENTER is the secret, worked for me!

 

[Bohunov]

Hey is there a way to hide text on scenes?

 

[MythMackay]

Hey is there a way to hide text on scenes?

If there is I haven't found it yet.

 

[MythMackay]

Not a bad start, but needs a LOT of work before I will spend anymore time on it. Notably, the ability to hide the dialogue box, so we can actually SEE the sexy stuff, and not this...

Spoiler: Bad, bad girls!

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After all, this is a visual novel.

 

[Filippogrande11]

i found varius problems:

1. the game is in 1800p but not fullscreen so it would be better if fullscreen or you can change dimension.
2. I haven't find a save place especially in the esc menu
3. you cant see the screen witouth the text, best way to do it is a button on the screen the middle mouse button and h key
4. one of the things that i really love in this tipe of games is beeing able to go back text messages scrolling with the middle button maybe even going back decisions

 

[Filippogrande11]

i found varius problems:

1. the game is in 1800p but not fullscreen so it would be better if fullscreen or you can change dimension.
2. I haven't find a save place especially in the esc menu
3. you cant see the screen witouth the text, best way to do it is a button on the screen the middle mouse button and h key
4. one of the things that i really love in this tipe of games is beeing able to go back text messages scrolling with the middle button maybe even going back decisions

I think the best thing is to do a fast update with no new content.
I really like the grafics and story

 

[AlpineBiscuits]

I will just ignore the haters and try to filter out the constructive criticism and improvement suggestions (why do people get so hostile?).

I tried to implement the more easy suggestions today and fix some found bugs, see change log. What I can't change so easily is the save system because of the library I use that comes with it. But they are working on a new save system in the next version, so I will adopt that when it comes out. Anyway, thanks to all that liked the game or gave some constructive feedback or reported bugs.

 

[markus T]

Like it so far.....only gripe so far is the inability to hide the dialogue box. Will definately keep an eye on this one.

 

[kirkmo]

Hello AlpineBiscuits,
I find your renders very cool and very detailed, but some of them probably need a little more light

 

[Elinan]

The text is very slow, unable to maximize the window, no way to hide the text box (h), no way to scroll back and no way to have several saves. Other than that it seems ok this far.

 

[Anam0rf]

Loving the game so far, looks very good and interesting to read. I think the worst part is definitely interface. Please add the ability to hide textbox. Also proper setting would be nice, i would like to mute this sound when you progress the text (kind of paper scratching sound). Don't listen to haters, game is great.

 

[Martinand]

Amazin start. Please keep up the good work!

 

[1tomadeira]

Looks pretty solid so far. Is there any other type of content that it may be added? Or the tags here already include the future plans?

Good luck on the project, definitely a quality release so far, if it keeps up it's surely worthy of patronage.