you are a weird one. all your posts in here imply that you can do it better. the story is awesome, and the game itself is really immersive. if you have done those things in elementary school already, I wonder where these stories of you are.
I don't know what you read between the lines in my comments, but you have to read with understanding, not just twist my words.. I didn't say the story is bad, I said I don't like it and there's a huge difference between the two.. this is my opinion about the game, it's ok if you don't agree with me and I didn't even expect nor did I want you to agree with me..
when I was younger, I used to write many stories and as you know or should know after time the stories get lost in the abyss of history and that's where my stories ended.. they served their purpose and are gone now and even if I never wrote anything, just read stories, I can still have my opinion on other styles and I don't have to prove to you or anyone else that I'm better or worse, because it doesn't work that way, but you'd know that if you at least tried a couple of times..
femdom city has the same "weird" camera angles btw. for obvious reasons.
weird angles were mentioned for certain reasons I already mentioned and I don't know why you mention femdom, but femdom had good angles from what I remember and I consider this game a masterpiece, from plot and writing perspective as well.. Blackmoore is just a try of a new thing, which Darktoz already admitted, it's not my opinion out of thin air nor my assumption..
imo the game is amazing, and you saying "nice try at least he stepped out of his comfort zone" is just weird. I already saw this when you needed to tell darktoz how the asian character, miko, had to look because you thought you know better.
I believe you think the game is awesome, but that's your opinion, not mine.. what I think I've already written and that's my opinion, not yours.. I stand by what I said, it's a really nice try and I'd definitely think, he should continue to get better.. If you think, he's already the best, than you have a pink glasses on and if you think, he's better than me, you're probably correct, because he has more experience with this kind of games than me, but I still can have my opinion.. and I'm not trying to put anyone down, but I still see room for improvement, especially with writing a dialogues and fingers/body parts going through objects.. as for Mika character, I said she's pretty, that it's the closest to an Asian girl he's done so far, but for me she has a too big tits and I stand by that.. you obviously see something else in that comment, but that is again your problem with understanding what is written and how you interpret it..
btw: this is not a hate comment, rather my opinion. I don't think that your current or your elementary writing would be better, and i think you are the only one who thinks that way..
you've never read anything from me, but you're sure I couldn't write anything better, that's a pretty ignorant opinion, but understandable, because you think I'm all talk and no action.. I don't take your opinion, nor am I offended.. criticism is a good thing, because it can make a person take action or change action, which is basically my approach when I write a comment.. I don't mean to insult anyone or say bad things about anyone, I just want to point out that some things I'm not as excited about as others, maybe I have a higher standard and that's not a bad thing, it's just different..
I understand that you felt the need to ground me, but you completely missed the point of my comment.. you explained it in your own way and this is what came out of it.. maybe now you will understand better and not be so hasty in writing the next comment to my address, but it's more a wish than an expectation..