OneManVN
That's the fourth your story, unlike previous three it's not in Alison setting. I suppose you know that Russians play your games too. In my personal opinion, the writing is worse than Alison, with the same depth of story, game looks like a parody (but I can't guess parody of what), with heavy comedian part and occasional porn. I was glad to see some cyrillic in the game, actual Russian (Google translate, I suppose), but the way you use it... The phrase "Sure, sir" (in Russian) has wrong character name above it, I suppose, it would be Tank commander, not Bear rider ('cause Bear rider calls sir no one). I liked how you used Russian meme with Photoshop Putin on a bear (and render is really similar to original, though in ridiculous clothes) but FYI, Mr. Putin is fluent in English enough to speak like Americans speak, at least not worse. If you don't believe me, just watch Oliver Stone documentary. The manner of speaking for Russian president is just insulting, Mr. Putin has distinct manner of speaking, what you showed... let's just say the humor of situation is lost with bad attempt of joking at Russian speaking. Another small thing I noticed, we Russians never speak Dear God, it's just cultural difference, we never use such phrase. In certain situations some Russians can say "Великий Боже" (usually some old people who actually believe in God), it's close equivalent, but the most of us never mention God when we are wondering or are amazed, we usually swear at that moment. And I always thought that the closest word to Russian "yes" is "duh", not "da", just by transcription.
But that just things my eyes stumble upon, the game looks interesting, like younger sister of Alison. Although I wanna ask when we can expect continuation of Alison's story.
That's the fourth your story, unlike previous three it's not in Alison setting. I suppose you know that Russians play your games too. In my personal opinion, the writing is worse than Alison, with the same depth of story, game looks like a parody (but I can't guess parody of what), with heavy comedian part and occasional porn. I was glad to see some cyrillic in the game, actual Russian (Google translate, I suppose), but the way you use it... The phrase "Sure, sir" (in Russian) has wrong character name above it, I suppose, it would be Tank commander, not Bear rider ('cause Bear rider calls sir no one). I liked how you used Russian meme with Photoshop Putin on a bear (and render is really similar to original, though in ridiculous clothes) but FYI, Mr. Putin is fluent in English enough to speak like Americans speak, at least not worse. If you don't believe me, just watch Oliver Stone documentary. The manner of speaking for Russian president is just insulting, Mr. Putin has distinct manner of speaking, what you showed... let's just say the humor of situation is lost with bad attempt of joking at Russian speaking. Another small thing I noticed, we Russians never speak Dear God, it's just cultural difference, we never use such phrase. In certain situations some Russians can say "Великий Боже" (usually some old people who actually believe in God), it's close equivalent, but the most of us never mention God when we are wondering or are amazed, we usually swear at that moment. And I always thought that the closest word to Russian "yes" is "duh", not "da", just by transcription.
But that just things my eyes stumble upon, the game looks interesting, like younger sister of Alison. Although I wanna ask when we can expect continuation of Alison's story.
