VN Ren'Py The Sinful City Fight for Love [v0.4] [Peacemaker]

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Game looks promising, I liked the randomness of everything, Real Madrid, Fifa, Rick and Morty and so on. Girls are interesting characters as well, my only reservation is that some girls are on the younger side, idk if loli content will happen or they're not gonna be LI's at this stage. I hope dev can clarify on this.
Dev said that there will be a time skip of several years at some point before the younger become love interests.
 

Porthas

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I don't know why or how you got this impression, but every kink in the game would be avoidable. But at the moment, I don't have any plans because I write as I go. I don't have everything planned out. I adapt my writing according to my crowd; I don't want to shock my fans; I want to please them and have fun writing this story.
Here's some friendly advice. If you're setting up a project and you want public support for the project, you have to tell folks what the project is. Not many devs do this, but a well organized presentation, along with clearly laid out production goals - and meeting those goals - will encourage folks to trust you.

Take the questions about lesbian, girl on girl action, for one example. There are games that focus on a female protagonist and they feature lesbians. People who like those kind of games see those labels and they play them and "support" them. There are games about ex military vigilantes saving damsels in distress and setting up a little harem of women that also work as spies for him - and people who are into that will play those and "support" them. There's all kinds of games and all kinds of tastes, but people generally do not like "everything."

It's like any product, you clearly label it so people know if it's something they are interested in. If you tell us all that you don't have a plan and that things will go with the flow, most of us are going to sit back and wait. I don't want to support a game that has stuff in it I don't like, and most people feel like that.

I'm not telling you what kind of game to make. In fact, I strongly suggest you don't design a game by committee. Write an outline, get the whole story in your mind and plan it out. Set it up in advance. Tell people clearly what you're making. Fans of that kind of entertainment will see you have a clear vision and they might be more likely to support that. But nobody wants to start helping out financially with a game only to find out a year into it that the story changed and there's a bunch of elements in the story they don't like. They'll feel like they've wasted their time and money.

Anyway, again, just friendly advice. Have a good one.
 

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1) just started playing, so far the daughters watching the nude guy dancing scene is bad. Why would I want my daughters watching some fat nude stranger. At least offer the choice for them not to watch it. I don't even want to watch it. Offer the choice soon as they see him, if we choose no jump to where they are crawling back inside.

2) Now these scenes with the 2 daughters is getting sus. Is this going to have gay lesbian garbage in it? or at least being able to say no to it happening? I want my girls/Li's straight.

3) Will this have more awesome Netori? I see our old high school gf is lusting after mc. MC going to steal her away? :love: :cool:

4)Will this be a optional full harem game ?

5) Pregnancy planned near the end? or if we're lucky, sooner?

6) Our daughter also has 3 legs in the render attached Peacemaker93

7) some of the club scenes (before the colored lights come on), and the outside Halloween scenes are so dark you can't see what is going on

THANK YOU (y) :)
 
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This update was awesome. Some super hot conversation with Naomi in the car, which goes very different ways depending on the choices. Also there are entire events and scenes that you will see only depending on certain choices (like the scene with MCs sister), so I'd advise saving on several of the dialogue choices and replaying to make sure you see them all. Awesome work, really loving this game, dev!
 
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moonshadow

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Certainly a decent update. Played it week or two ago. Just annoys me when you pick a choice and the game tells you "WIP" or "this path is not complete yet, pick another choice".
But, on the other hand, there's at least a start and end point in the update. Just that some paths/choices are not in the game yet.
Personally, the scenes with Emma was probably the ones I liked the most, in the entire game 'so far'.

And there's only really one thing I deeply dislike about this game at the moment. The text, that font is terrible. Gives me headache, and in many cases, completely unreadable as not only is the font terrible, but sometimes you cant even SEE the text as it melts in with the background of certain scenes.
But this is honestly the only complaint I have. As of missing content/paths in the latest update..meh, as annoying as it is, not something I would put on the "negatives" list, at least not for now.
 
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The Sinful City Fight For Love [v0.175] [Peacemaker]

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hermesh

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Just started playing and looks very good so far. One thing i noticed is the textbox transparency can be a bit too high/see through which can make text hard to read in a light scene (works great in most scenes, but textbox transparency slider in settings would be nice):
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MrBenny

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Did you play the game? The relationship is based on player input. There is no mention of the family in the script. I think that is in line with Patreon. Either way, any game here can be nuked if some users decide to report it. I would love to be on Subcribestar, but they accept people with some following or if someone has vouched for them, but waiting to get a page activated is way too long if you don't have any, like I don't have now. But I hope this is something that can change in the future. If you have idea to help me with Subscribestar I would appreciate the help brother. :)
Hmm...Add a harem path and maybe add more tag details to your gene section...and YOU will have your own following...just saying. ;)

This example below shows the projects present, future, and not happening tags...as well the dev answers some questions how the some content will be handled. All this was done on the first day release, which secured a huge following for a first project. Also just saying...

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Spyderwraith

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Do you have a way to fix the name issue?
Example the game shows like this
Hi nice to meet youName
or
Hi you can call meName
it seems where ever the name is the spacing between the word prior does not exist.

It only seems to happen some times, like if the scene reads "Name gets into the car" then the spacing is normal.
But if the scene reads "Is this your carName?" the spacing is non existent.
Visual example below
Edit: the player can fix it themselves by putting hitting spacebar once and then entering the name. While it's a fix technically it is not really since you shouldn't need to press space.
Edit 2: I do not know if the same issue exists for the Surname as I have not yet gotten to a spot where the Surname shows in any dialogue
Edit 3: It does not appear to be an issue for anything you enter when you're in the relationship definition section

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MrBenny

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Just started playing and looks very good so far. One thing i noticed is the textbox transparency can be a bit too high/see through which can make text hard to read in a light scene (works great in most scenes, but textbox transparency slider in settings would be nice):
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Hi...here's a few changes that I put together if you want to see better visible dialog text.

Install: Extract the zip, then merge the game folders together. Run the title and make the changes as shown below.
Enjoy.

(Here's an example of the textbox and font changes, along with the slider set to 50%.)
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(This image below shows two changes made...added 4 textbox choices, and dialog box opacity slider.)
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(I used a black brick image, so I could better see the black text box choice in the preference section. As well, I view AVN's on a huge ass TV...so I like to use my dark background.)
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(Now the last thing to do...Changing the hard to see default font, hit shit A or just your A key, then change the font to DejaVu Sans.)

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allanl9020142

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So if I'm understanding the timeline of updates correctly, there was a huge initial release of content and then not even 3 months later another huge update. Just going off of the render count.

Cool. That makes me pretty hopeful about this. Definitely going to try this. I usually try not to play early dev stuff and as a rule of thumb, I consider "early dev" to be under either 5 updates or 1,000 renders. This dev blew that threshold out of the water with the initial release lol.
 

AgnorWolf

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I liked the first release, it was solid and you can definitely tell there was real effort and time put into it and it was a fairly linear story which I appreciate. This last update was kind of bizarre to be honest.
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I really do still like the game but I just feel a few things need tweaking. You have all the ingredients for a great game, maybe just a tweak on the recipe and your golden.
 

sikebro12

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Hi...here's a few changes that I put together if you want to see better visible dialog text.

Install: Extract the zip, then merge the game folders together. Run the title and make the changes as shown below.
Enjoy.

(Here's an example of the textbox and font changes, along with the slider set to 50%.)
View attachment 3375616

(This image below shows two changes made...added 4 textbox choices, and dialog box opacity slider.)
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(I used a black brick image, so I could better see the black text box choice in the preference section. As well, I view AVN's on a huge ass TV...so I like to use my dark background.)
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(Now the last thing to do...Changing the hard to see default font, hit shit A or just your A key, then change the font to DejaVu Sans.)

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Can you add something to change the Font color?
 
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botc76

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Well, the game isn't horrible, but the English could be a lot better. That kind of drags everything down a bit.
There are a few annoying design decisions here. For one the textbox, either offer a shader for it, or make it less transparent. It's hard to read. Which leads me to the second problem, the fonts being used here suck. What's with all those stupid outline fonts? Again, this is just a chore to read and strains my eyes.
Then, if you input a player name, it's missing a space before the word in regular text.

I also think the ages are sometimes attributed to the wrong girls.
All in all, it's not bad, but it's also not really good.

Fix the design mistakes, get a good English editor/proofreader, then this could be something good instead of just alright.
 
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