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VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Sinful City Fight for Love [v0.4] [Peacemaker]

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Woodstock_1983

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If you cheat on your wife, does she end up leaving or divorcing you? If not, then I'll probably sleep with as many girls as I can lol.
 

Woodstock_1983

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Still playing currently, but noticed some inconsistencies that I thought I'd mention for ya.

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Like I said, still playing at the moment, but just wanted to mention those that I came across for now. ;)
The part about the wallet, how do we know that he really had his wallet and ID but was flirting with the female officer so she would rub him down if you know what I mean lol.
 

varkatzas666

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The story is good, the girls are gorgeous and sexy, but I feel like there are too many flashbacks, instead of focusing on the present story, just my opinion
 

RYOUSC

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Awesome first release. Very promising! I love those two older daughters already! Will keep an eye on this one.
 

goulet1995

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Thank you so much for your nice words and review. I love my Isi, and don’t worry, I plan to tell this story in my way. Also yes, this is my first game ever.
il take this to mean lesbian stuff will not be avoidable dont know why you dont answer that question but based on that it not likely something id enjoy good luck with your game though
 

Peacemaker93

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il take this to mean lesbian stuff will not be avoidable dont know why you dont answer that question but based on that it not likely something id enjoy good luck with your game though
I don't know why or how you got this impression, but every kink in the game would be avoidable. But at the moment, I don't have any plans because I write as I go. I don't have everything planned out. I adapt my writing according to my crowd; I don't want to shock my fans; I want to please them and have fun writing this story.
 

goulet1995

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I don't know why or how you got this impression, but every kink in the game would be avoidable. But at the moment, I don't have any plans because I write as I go. I don't have everything planned out. I adapt my writing according to my crowd; I don't want to shock my fans; I want to please them and have fun writing this story.
i assumed based on multiple people asking and you seemingly avoiding the question then the responce i quoted you gave to someone where they mention people complaining about lesbian good to know its avoidable though i will give this a try
 

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So I enjoyed the first demo but the dialogue could use some work. I think the dev is a non native English speaker because there is some weird word order in the sentence structure that makes some lines not make a whole lot of sense.

Visiuals are good and from the gist I got from the story I like it, but this definitely needs a proof reader or two to translate what the Dev means into sentences that make sense in english.
 
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battali0n

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I don't know why or how you got this impression, but every kink in the game would be avoidable. But at the moment, I don't have any plans because I write as I go. I don't have everything planned out. I adapt my writing according to my crowd; I don't want to shock my fans; I want to please them and have fun writing this story.
I also am concerned about the lesbian fetish as well as many other unwanted tags. While I understand that you haven't planned it out yet you could put a lot of us at ease by listing the tags you think you might include as well as the one's you will never include and whether they will be optional(player determines whether they happen), skippable(they happen anyway but the MC doesn't see it) or unavoidable.
It has been my experience that developers know what they like and might put in their game.
Thank you for your time.
 

everhardninja

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Game looks promising, I liked the randomness of everything, Real Madrid, Fifa, Rick and Morty and so on. Girls are interesting characters as well, my only reservation is that some girls are on the younger side, idk if loli content will happen or they're not gonna be LI's at this stage. I hope dev can clarify on this.
 

Porthas

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I don't know why or how you got this impression, but every kink in the game would be avoidable. But at the moment, I don't have any plans because I write as I go. I don't have everything planned out. I adapt my writing according to my crowd; I don't want to shock my fans; I want to please them and have fun writing this story.
Here's some friendly advice. If you're setting up a project and you want public support for the project, you have to tell folks what the project is. Not many devs do this, but a well organized presentation, along with clearly laid out production goals - and meeting those goals - will encourage folks to trust you.

Take the questions about lesbian, girl on girl action, for one example. There are games that focus on a female protagonist and they feature lesbians. People who like those kind of games see those labels and they play them and "support" them. There are games about ex military vigilantes saving damsels in distress and setting up a little harem of women that also work as spies for him - and people who are into that will play those and "support" them. There's all kinds of games and all kinds of tastes, but people generally do not like "everything."

It's like any product, you clearly label it so people know if it's something they are interested in. If you tell us all that you don't have a plan and that things will go with the flow, most of us are going to sit back and wait. I don't want to support a game that has stuff in it I don't like, and most people feel like that.

I'm not telling you what kind of game to make. In fact, I strongly suggest you don't design a game by committee. Write an outline, get the whole story in your mind and plan it out. Set it up in advance. Tell people clearly what you're making. Fans of that kind of entertainment will see you have a clear vision and they might be more likely to support that. But nobody wants to start helping out financially with a game only to find out a year into it that the story changed and there's a bunch of elements in the story they don't like. They'll feel like they've wasted their time and money.

Anyway, again, just friendly advice. Have a good one.
 
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