VN Ren'Py The Singer [v0.70] [IntensiveCareGames]

[Kadajko]

Yes! Please let me know what you think is ridiculous. It's not a problem.

Ok:

1) Knock on the door or not when Lily is in the bathroom doesn't change anything about the outcome of the interaction.

2) ALL the choices with Lily have the same outcomes ( as I pointed out before ), besides the ones where you choose Ria instead.

3) ALL the choices with Julia don't change anything. Also there is a choice that is just a single option which is ''tell her'', so a choice comes up but there is only one option.

4) MC cheats with Lily in the bathroom, later there is a choice to cheat with her again on the couch, but later in the kitchen MC cheats with Lily again. You are sandwiching a choice to cheat an extra time between two times that he cheats by canon, which means you are basically asking if the player wants to see an extra sex scene or not, obviously the answer is yes, as there is no incentive not to. As there are no consequences of cheating an extra time.

5) I don't see difference in choice with Angel between Grayson and MC.

6) I don't see any differences between choices in the mall and with Fiona.

7) Also the overarching theme of the whole game with Ria, basically, no matter if you give her max love and least corruption OR give her least love and max corruption and make her bang every single guy possible, at the ned of the update there is just a single choice for her to either kiss carl and have sex with him or to thank him and have sex with MC. And if she has sex with MC they tell each other they love each other and Ria asks him to never leave her. Basically the whole corruption / love system that is accumulated all game long gets completely disregarded by that one choice. Which is good because the choice is meaningful but then it nullifies all the other choices.

 

[Alleykatt]

I don't mind NTR being unavoidable, but I do object to forcing the MC to cheat on Ria.

 

[Kadajko]

I don't mind NTR being unavoidable, but I do object to forcing the MC to cheat on Ria.

Yes, this is not for people who want MC to be a cuck, he is fuckboy.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

I don't mind NTR being unavoidable, but I do object to forcing the MC to cheat on Ria.

I'm a little confused by this perspective, surely, the best model would be one where either protagonist could cheat on the other, or not, or one does and the other doesn't; and all of those permutations would lead to separate outcomes.

I make this distinction because it seems like a lot of people don't mind it being "on rails", they just aren't the rails they'd personally prefer. In contrast, I dislike games which guide you on a set path, no matter if that path is chock-full of stuff I like. It removes agency, which is one of the core reasons to play these games instead of just watching porn or playing AAA games.

 

[Slick Bean]

Hold your horses, gamers!
Where is it IN THE NIGHTMARE male MC HAS ABUT CARL WHERE YOU ARE CONFORTABLE?
RighT off the bat, the viLain is inside the mind of the boyfriend: fkking Ria.
Then multiple times fkking her BFF and she sees this and is disgusted.

Also the overarching theme of the whole game with Ria, basically, no matter if you give her max love and least corruption OR give her least love and max corruption and make her bang every single guy possible, at the ned of the update there is just a single choice for her to either kiss carl and have sex with him or to thank him and have sex with MC. And if she has sex with MC they tell each other they love each other and Ria asks him to never leave her. Basically the whole corruption / love system that is accumulated all game long gets completely disregarded by that one choice. Which is good because the choice is meaningful but then it nullifies all the other choices.

Yes, this is not for people who want MC to be a cuck, he is fuckboy.

I dislike games which guide you on a set path, no matter if that path is chock-full of stuff I like. It removes agency, which is one of the core reasons to play these games instead of just watching porn or playing AAA games.

The only thing that ever made sense is the FINAL CHOICE TO DITCH CARL AND RETURN TO HER BF.
Why do you think CARL IS SET TO MURDER THE RAPIST?
BECAUSE THAT TOOL RUINED RIA FOR HIM FOREVER.

Those gamers who are absolutely cruel and whatever about only seeing mindless sex, only they could
STEER RIA TOWARDS CARL AFTER THAT MONUMENTAL FUCKUP.
Why do you all believe the game STARTS WITH THE MONOLOGUE OF THE PLOT ARMORED VILAIN?

Of course, everybody can game as much as they want and make Ria the brainless talentless whore you want to see.
But if anything grey ever moves in between your ears while playing, THE RAPE CUT CARL OFF FOR GOOD.

 

[Mohawk01]

Can someone help Im getting this error only on corruption path, I played from start but its same error again

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 17902, in script
menu:
File "game/screens.rpy", line 207, in execute
screen choice(items):
File "game/screens.rpy", line 207, in execute
screen choice(items):
File "game/screens.rpy", line 210, in execute
vbox:
File "game/screens.rpy", line 211, in execute
for i in items:
File "game/screens.rpy", line 212, in execute
textbutton i.caption action i.action
NameError: Name 'erialove-1' is not defined.

Here is the save View attachment 5-4-LT1.save

 

[instaMagix]

Updated Android port. Nothing too fancy but let me know if you have any issues.

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[Jeansjaulet03]

Are you saying that watching vilainous Carl dreams and scenes all the time
or slut jess totally inconsequential filler scenes fill your heart?

At least the boyfriend meets new girls who are not Carl sluts,
that has to count for something.

Not yet.

Too bad, I'd love to see how a fight between the two would play out, I'll keep waiting.

 

[Big Rooster]

Does Ria cheat on you no matter what you do? just to know whether to play or not

Of course!

 

[single_guy_from_au]

Guys... I read every single one of your comments. Good or bad, it doesn't matter. But sometimes you're ridiculous and drag on too long. There's no need for that. Play the game and enjoy the sex scenes.

Of course, keep commenting. Be sure to tell me about my mistakes (mistakes in the code). There may be errors in the point system. You know, this is my first update in about 5 months. I try to revise a lot of things, but sometimes I don't notice them.

yakargi - I want you to know - you are doing an excellent job here.

And if some people are unhappy - there are plenty of harem games (where one guy has 20+ girls who cannot live without him).

Thank you for your hard work and I am looking forward to your next update (season 2) - and I really mean it.

 

[Takkertje]

Can someone help Im getting this error only on corruption path, I played from start but its same error again

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 17902, in script
menu:
File "game/screens.rpy", line 207, in execute
screen choice(items):
File "game/screens.rpy", line 207, in execute
screen choice(items):
File "game/screens.rpy", line 210, in execute
vbox:
File "game/screens.rpy", line 211, in execute
for i in items:
File "game/screens.rpy", line 212, in execute
textbutton i.caption action i.action
NameError: Name 'erialove-1' is not defined.

Here is the save View attachment 2975412

Same error over here.
Been playing from the beginning since old saves from 0.55 give more 'not defined' errors.

 

[weird_queer]

how the hell is this game 5.6GB????

 

[Ilcoriglianese forte]

At the point where we get to Ria and the Boss, considering what Ria says during the relationship and how she behaves, what sense does it make now for her to continue or have the courage to tell the boy to be together, she now shows devotion to the Boss. now Ria falls to the dark side in the stable of sluts, at that point she deserves the worst to then be dumped, in my opinion it would be a great humiliation for her, and the boy who continues to fuck the others including his boss at the shop, very tempting as I continue

 

[Ilcoriglianese forte]

Ok:

1) Knock on the door or not when Lily is in the bathroom doesn't change anything about the outcome of the interaction.

2) ALL the choices with Lily have the same outcomes ( as I pointed out before ), besides the ones where you choose Ria instead.

3) ALL the choices with Julia don't change anything. Also there is a choice that is just a single option which is ''tell her'', so a choice comes up but there is only one option.

4) MC cheats with Lily in the bathroom, later there is a choice to cheat with her again on the couch, but later in the kitchen MC cheats with Lily again. You are sandwiching a choice to cheat an extra time between two times that he cheats by canon, which means you are basically asking if the player wants to see an extra sex scene or not, obviously the answer is yes, as there is no incentive not to. As there are no consequences of cheating an extra time.

5) I don't see difference in choice with Angel between Grayson and MC.

6) I don't see any differences between choices in the mall and with Fiona.

7) Also the overarching theme of the whole game with Ria, basically, no matter if you give her max love and least corruption OR give her least love and max corruption and make her bang every single guy possible, at the ned of the update there is just a single choice for her to either kiss carl and have sex with him or to thank him and have sex with MC. And if she has sex with MC they tell each other they love each other and Ria asks him to never leave her. Basically the whole corruption / love system that is accumulated all game long gets completely disregarded by that one choice. Which is good because the choice is meaningful but then it nullifies all the other choices.

Sorry, if I may, that means that these 2 final choices in the update determine the whole story, if she kisses Carl she becomes his whore and ends the story with MC, if she kisses MC instead the story continues. so there will be 2 parallel stories. because otherwise after these choices I don't see that MC is needed in the story anymore. my reflection

 

[Ilcoriglianese forte]

Yes, this is not for people who want MC to be a cuck, he is fuckboy.

Well if I may, both are cuckolds, and the first to cheat was MC, several times, it can be said that the story loses bite because neither of the 2 gives a damn about the other, so the game becomes just a fuck and that's it.

 

[88stanford88]

Yes! Please let me know what you think is ridiculous. It's not a problem.

This is my first game. I certainly don't think it's a perfect game, but it won't be my last game! I played a lot of games before I started this job. I've seen a lot of people's first and later games. Some of them are still stagnate, some of them have achieved great success. Some of them are very simple at the beginning of the game, but towards the end they have made great progress. I follow many of these developments and I hope I will be one of those successful developers.

your game is amazing!
there are ppl that hate NTR... but you are my hero!

I just hope to see more extreme cheating sex scenes for Ria in the future!
She is a great singer!

 

[Ilcoriglianese forte]

What fun is it in watching only sex scenes, without them giving you an emotion to follow the story, you might as well make a video only about the scenes, and be honest with the public, if you call it a game, there must be a reason, if someone just wants to see the scenes, then it's a video, ntr or not, if you try your hand at producing a game, you have to give them the ability to play, otherwise forget it, the beauty of these games is the fantasy you create with the story, what is difficult to implement in reality, not simply point and sweep. Of course, it's not for everyone to create a story. easier to describe extreme sex scenes, 2 minute things

 

[WeAreChecking]

What fun is it in watching only sex scenes, without them giving you an emotion to follow the story, you might as well make a video only about the scenes, and be honest with the public, if you call it a game, there must be a reason, if someone just wants to see the scenes, then it's a video, ntr or not, if you try your hand at producing a game, you have to give them the ability to play, otherwise forget it, the beauty of these games is the fantasy you create with the story, what is difficult to implement in reality, not simply point and sweep. Of course, it's not for everyone to create a story. easier to describe extreme sex scenes, 2 minute things

You know if you don't find this game "fun" you are free to move on and play other games theres no need to give your negative opinion.

Also bro it's not that deep it's a fucking porn game and you are in a pirate website. Chill out

 

[Big Rooster]

Guys... I read every single one of your comments. Good or bad, it doesn't matter. But sometimes you're ridiculous and drag on too long. There's no need for that. Play the game and enjoy the sex scenes.

Of course, keep commenting. Be sure to tell me about my mistakes (mistakes in the code). There may be errors in the point system. You know, this is my first update in about 5 months. I try to revise a lot of things, but sometimes I don't notice them.

Pretty good update, the artwork and animations are great. but some of the dialog... not so much. I suggest using an app to point out mistakes in grammar, you can always keep the trademark, dry-humor aspect of their conversations.
Just a suggestion... After a TBI, I had to relearn how to speak and write, I'm using the Free version of the Grammarly app. You could try it, and it works on most text editing tools too. It works as a real-time proofreader.

 

[Mohawk01]

Same error over here.
Been playing from the beginning since old saves from 0.55 give more 'not defined' errors.

Well, I guess no corruption path for us