VN Ren'Py The Singer [v0.75 Part 2] [IntensiveCareGames]

[Mwanted]

There's a bug..jlove, after a certain step, will always be >=1 (when it should not be, aka when you chose "don't take another coffee)

 

[yakargi]

There's a bug..jlove, after a certain step, will always be >=1 (when it should not be, aka when you chose "don't take another coffee)

ok. i will look the codes. thanks for warning.

 

[yakargi]

NameError: name 'telllizaboutria' is not defined

NameError: name 'juliahate' is not defined

NameError: name 'kisstodd1' is not defined

I added new values to use in future versions. It's important for the story to continue. You needto start new game. sorry for this.

 

[yakargi]

I love to look through NTR tags and constantly laugh about a lot of abusive comments people leave about unavoidable NTR. That's really fun thing to see how somebody worked up about something they could easily avoid. For example, I highly dislike gay/futa/trans content. So I'm just ignoring games with unavoidable scenes of the kind, no matter how cool art they have. Why it's so hard to just ignore things you don't like for all those furious reviewers?

Unfortunately I have to put up with them and there are a lot of them on this site.

 

[phupdup]

It's annoying when devs backfill story and branching, forcing us to restart every time they do this.

  File "game/script.rpy", line 5740, in <module>
    if  kisstodd1 == True:
NameError: name 'kisstodd1' is not defined

This particular example is more than halfway back from the end of the script and took a while before blowing me up. When J. Michael Straczynski developed the Babylon 5 TV series, he wrote the entire 5 season story arc before writing the script for the pilot. Devs should follow this example for planning ahead. I can understand going back and re-rendering or tweaking dialog, but changing plot points or whole scenes is bad form.

 

[yakargi]

The writing definitely needs improvement.

If I increase my earnings a little, I will hire a good translator. And I'm going to rewrite the story.

 

[yakargi]

It's annoying when devs backfill story and branching, forcing us to restart every time they do this.

  File "game/script.rpy", line 5740, in <module>
    if  kisstodd1 == True:
NameError: name 'kisstodd1' is not defined

This particular example is more than halfway back from the end of the script and took a while before blowing me up. When J. Michael Straczynski developed the Babylon 5 TV series, he wrote the entire 5 season story arc before writing the script for the pilot. Devs should follow this example for planning ahead. I can understand going back and re-rendering or tweaking dialog, but changing plot points or whole scenes is bad form.

You right!
Unfortunately, my full-time job takes up a lot of my time. So I have to make some additions. This is a big problem for me. Now I've started to fit the story into a mold. You won't see problems like this in the future.

 

[yakargi]

I read the free patreon post about adding new characters. I'm fine with that, as long as Ria visits Daniel by herself in the future and getting her fun while the bf doesn't know about it

She will have a good time with Daniel. You can be sure

 

[Canto Forte]

This be the premise of this game:
”
You are boyfriend that girl.
Ria will soon become a famous singer and her life will become more marginal. Can you keep up with that?
”

So players are the bf whose life becomes marginal .. in a game where HE IS THE MC ???
That would be grounds for applying to receive suicidal aid
or board the train to nowhere like in the matrix.

Here is the thing ... accepting DINNERS/DATES from managers or fans is straight up private life.

 

[yakargi]

I like the game, although the plot seems to me rather unusual and strange)
"how to cheat on each other and not get caught." So far, this seems to be the goal of the entire game.

Correct me if I'm wrong. It seems to me that in the end, we will have to make a choice whether they will stay together or not.
In different combinations:
They will have fun together, they will break up with each other, she will become a whore, he will be left with nothing, and so on.

I would love to answer your questions. But I can't.
Because, I don't want be giving spoilers

 

[yakargi]

So anyone else getting a LOT of errors in this? Luckily they can be skipped over by clicking Ignore, but still.

And for some reason before each new render I see the image of the MC walking in front of the pub

I made additions to the coding. That's why you see those errors. I suggest you start a new game. Sorry.

 

[yakargi]

Here's a error, instead of showing Carl's name it shows Todd.

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Oh! My bad. Sorry for this

 

[NateGrey]

I made additions to the coding. That's why you see those errors. I suggest you start a new game. Sorry.

Ah, thanks for clarifying that! And no worries, at this stage starting anew is no big sacrifice yet

 

[Canto Forte]

I do not want this in any way .. I am the MC and I want Ria, not some macho asshole.

Oh! My bad. Sorry for this

Being in bed with someone is private life all the way thru and thru .. no carreer mombo jombo.

 

[JokerLeader]

Oh! My bad. Sorry for this

It's ok

 

[Canto Forte]

Does your mod remove all the other assholes getting the gurls away from MC?

It's ok

Players are the MC who is not Ria and sure as hell not a fly on some assholes wall.

 

[Canto Forte]

Let me get this straight:
It did not bother you the description 4 the game that states MC is the BF???
News flash 4 you - you play the boyfriend who cannot have the time with Ria.
Why? Because of all the other assholes dev throws on to her day in and day out.

Back to game description: Ria is supposed to have no time 4 personal life:
New flash, she goes on dates and rides with fans and self serving asshloes.
That is her private life that she fills with all the assholes dev throws on her.

Dots never seem to connect in this game.

It IS a great game. I think the biggest confusion comes from the Multiple Protag situation - people do not grasp that the MAIN MC is the female - not the male...
As far as NTR goes, I am not a big fan, but this one did not trigger me! Keep it up - let the fun and games continue!

 

[NateGrey]

Let me get this straight:
It did not bother you the description 4 the game that states MC is the BF???
News flash 4 you - you play the boyfriend who cannot have the time with Ria.
Why? Because of all the other assholes dev throws on to her day in and day out.

Back to game description: Ria is supposed to have no time 4 personal life:
New flash, she goes on dates and rides with fans and self serving asshloes.
That is her private life that she fills with all the assholes dev throws on her.

Dots never seem to connect in this game.

I'm not sure if you're serious or your last posts are an elaborate trolling attempt, but you realise this is explicitly an NTR game, right? So obviously the MC's gf is going to get with several other dudes. Kind of odd to play this game knowing that going in, and then complain about it

 

[yakargi]

Let me get this straight:
It did not bother you the description 4 the game that states MC is the BF???
News flash 4 you - you play the boyfriend who cannot have the time with Ria.
Why? Because of all the other assholes dev throws on to her day in and day out.

Back to game description: Ria is supposed to have no time 4 personal life:
New flash, she goes on dates and rides with fans and self serving asshloes.
That is her private life that she fills with all the assholes dev throws on her.

Dots never seem to connect in this game.

Oh man! You think too deeply. Do you need to exaggerate so much? This is just a game. Enjoy it!

I know i'm not a professional writer. If I were, I wouldn't write a porn game.

 

[Canto Forte]

I am giving this another go .. thrying to salvage what is left of Rias self esteem.

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Hope gaming will chill me out some.