Unity rework broke a lot of shit, like the names change when you load a game, and you can't mute the sounds unless you also mute the music, save system is terrible, can't roll back, shit like that... why change from renpy, it's perfect! Whatever, your decision.
Anyways, apart from that, the update... isn't great. The grammar/writing is still terrible, and even though the plot is based on a comic that has an ok plot, it still manages to fuck that up. Like, the plot revolves around a cosplay event, but we never see a single cosplay, it's just generic "hey babysitter aka mom lets fuck" "ok". This game had potential but it's letting me down... improve the writing, put some more effort into the story (and the renders), go back to renpy, and then we'll have a really good game.