VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Story of a Survivor [Ep.1] [Piloo]

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Gleemer

Gleemer

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Here is the Italian translation
of The Story of a Survivor [Ep.1]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.

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Ecco la traduzione italiana
di un fan The Story of a Survivor [Ep.1]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.

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Here is the Italian translation
of The Story of a Survivor [Demo]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.

You must be registered to see the links


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Ecco la traduzione italiana
di un fan The Story of a Survivor [Demo]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.

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LowKeyLeo

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Wouldn't mind seeing a little bit of hair on the MC's body for once, seeing as this is set in the apocalypse and all that.

It's a nice introductory release. Gives the audience a glimpse on who the characters and how they interact with each other.

Keep up the great work and hope this becomes a successful venture for you Piloo.
 
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DrakoGhoul

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I'm a tad bit late to the party but this looks good. I love when games use these types of settings. It's one of my favorite in all of fictional media. From reading the overview and looking at the pictures, I'd say this is pretty straightforward. I'm going to check this out real quick and see how it actually plays.
 
Hysni

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Looks Good :cool:(y)
This game takes place in a post apocalyptic world. Mankind is almost completely extinct.:oops: (y)
But need one extra TAG :pREGNANCY
 
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Vrijgeest

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The Engrish is quite annoying. A proofreader is required. Grilling does not refer to cooking BTW.
Otherwise an interesting story but a bit lame. The artwork is unusual but good. I did not like the font that was used for the text. I used <shift-A> to change it.
 
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darkangel898

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When i start the game, it instantly crash. if i try to start it again, windows say the program do not respond

other have this issue?
 
Content_Consumer

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Should be something like;

"... to reconnoiter ..." [this is the verb form]

or

"... to do reconnaissance ..." [This is the noun form]

Now for describing the person who performs the act of reconnaissance;

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You should say something like;

"She wants to be a scout" [more modern/English]
"She wants to be a reconnaisseur" [Correct version, though less well known as its directly taken from the French origin of the word]
"She wants to be a reconnoiterer" [Also correct, though possibly outdated/obsolete.]


You could replace the whole word group with that of "scout"

"I love to scout..."
"So I had more time to scout..."
"She wants to be a scout"

That might be easier to work with for someone that doesn't have English as a first language.



Also you need to decide if the black dude is called James or Jason, you're using both names for the same guy.
 
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