VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Story of a Survivor [Ep.1] [Piloo]

[piloo55]

piloo55

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Should be something like;

"... to reconnoiter ..." [this is the verb form]

or

"... to do reconnaissance ..." [This is the noun form]

Now for describing the person who performs the act of reconnaissance;

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You should say something like;

"She wants to be a scout" [more modern/English]
"She wants to be a reconnaisseur" [Correct version, though less well known as its directly taken from the French origin of the word]
"She wants to be a reconnoiterer" [Also correct, though possibly outdated/obsolete.]


You could replace the whole word group with that of "scout"

"I love to scout..."
"So I had more time to scout..."
"She wants to be a scout"

That might be easier to work with for someone that doesn't have English as a first language.



Also you need to decide if the black dude is called James or Jason, you're using both names for the same guy.

Thx!

 

[piloo55]

Harem?

Yes, there will be a harem in the game.

 

[chicken head]

Yes, there will be a harem in the game.

 

[Hellkinglucifer]

Yes, there will be a harem in the game.

Really nice start to the game. Love how you are using choices so we can mould the personality of MC and the game to our liking like you can be just friendly with a Li or avoid unwanted fetishes like voyeurism or BDSM. Just watch out for missing variable checks and change during coding which can cause inconsistency in the story with so many variable in game.

Also YES harem all the girls are just too damn beautiful with different personalities and bodies can't bring myself to refuse any

 

[Havenless_]

Really nice start to the game. Love how you are using choices so we can mould the personality of MC and the game to our liking like you can be just friendly with a Li or avoid unwanted fetishes like voyeurism or BDSM. Just watch out for missing variable checks and change during coding which can cause inconsistency in the story with so many variable in game.

Also YES harem all the girls are just too damn beautiful with different personalities and bodies can't bring myself to refuse any

I agree! Shaved or natural vagina, cunnilingus, BDSM ... It would be nice if it were like that with all possible fetishes.

I just hope I'm not forced to dominate Linda, be dominated by her, or like BDSM if I want to be in her route. I like certain fetishes, but I don't really like being forced into a fetish if I want to romance a certain character.

 

[Takkertje]

Guys , will you please stop nagging about dev's first game?
As he stated this isn't a continuation , he only re-used material from it.
I'm gonna try this one and see for myself.
And if he abandons the lot , so be it.
Plenty more fish in the sea.

 

[Gleemer]

Here is the Italian translation

of The Story of a Survivor [Ep.1]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.



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Ecco la traduzione italiana

di un fan The Story of a Survivor [Ep.1]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.



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Here is the Italian translation

of The Story of a Survivor [Demo]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.



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Ecco la traduzione italiana

di un fan The Story of a Survivor [Demo]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.

Italian translation

Updated: 2021-07-14
Version: Ep.1

 

[caxhub]

this is an unofficial android port The Story of a Survivor [Ep.1] APK -

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[Takkertje]

Short and not much sexual happening yet.
Suggestive enough but for now a dry-humper.

 

[pandaren69]

Evelyn looks similar to emma watson

 

[Space_Cow99]

No cities and no ruins right for setting if there shaved people roaming around so that means we won't tell from male and female characteristics maybe they just make male have more "bushy" eyebrows and that be all hair you ever need.
Post-apo settling will there be roaming mobs of undead, mutants or just few females and one male?

 

[Larry2000]

Is it normal for your eyes to bleed when looking at the images in this game? Like, HOLY HIGH CONTRAST BATMAN!

There is a sense that the day light doesn't actually bounce, it just stays on the surface of objects until it disappears. I kind of reminds me of playing Half Life where everything looked great, but lighting wasn't solved yet. I guess I'm going back to Ravenholm... wish me luck!

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[Bazooka171]

Anyone got news about this game?

 

[Ottoeight]

Anyone got news about this game?

No Patreon posts since 14th July. No posts here.

He has no Patrons. So, no idea of what's happening

 

[sdna1]

No Patreon posts since 14th July. No posts here.

He has no Patrons. So, no idea of what's happening

i have realy acurate idea, that it is abandoned...like his another one release gameS before.

 

[Kond]

aaaaaaaaand its officially abandoned.

 

[LowKeyLeo]

Shame its abandoned. Really looked forward to having an MC that wasn't a either an ugly bastard, a paper-thin "legal" boy, or just straight up an underage boy that they say is over 18 years old.

 

[Content_Consumer]

well he was last logged in here Dec 24 and couldn't be bothered to post so pretty safe bet there isn't much chance of a return.

 

[Soulbringer71]

DOES ANYONE HAVE A COPY OF GAME? ALL LINKS ARE NOT WORKING. THANKS.