qwerfgh

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I played through the game and got the to the gallery.
But is every scene displayed there or just the ones that were experienced?
Seems like you really can't make a difference by the choices, it force to a "right" choice.

The game is quite long, still it's very good art and well worth the play-through.
The MTL works, but you need to have a good imagination and imagine proper sentences.
But you don't exactly want to play through it another time.

Unfortunately. there's no What-IF scenes for bad endings.:/
 
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rokrad

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The NTR cannot be avoided but it's weak. It's not even netorare in the sense that the girls gets really stolen. I't s a story with a focus on women whoring themselves out for duty/love. Their body is stained and their pussy takes load after load from random people, but their heart, even if hardened, stays pure.

It's more of a short, "heartwarming" linear story where the protagonist must face several challenges in order to grow up, become a man and earn the throne he inherited. He can only succeed and get his cum-stained prize or get a game over screen.

The MTL is what I call "Cormorant class", i.e. slightly refined 2012 google translate. It's usable but it doesn't make sense given the tools we have nowadays.
This sounds like the usual lazy bullshirtery that gets posted sometimes but, no this is exactly what happens. Its terrible, it doesn't even really have an ending. The "ending" for the Main Female lead's epilogue is literally just "and they lived blessedly". While the other characters get several lines for their endings. Even the fucking rapist brother gets a better epilogue lolz. Theres no pay off to anything, save your self the trouble and don't bother.

Which is a same since Fallen Knightess is pretty good.
 

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アムルとアイシャと小さな国の物語 The Story of Amru and Aisha and the Small Country (Suzuya) [RJ429567]

Game uploaded from (hentai-sharing) (japanese) on workupload:
 
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lusciousboy01

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Hi! I'm currently experimenting with a new translation tool and decided to try it out on this game.
The tool uses a local AI model for translation, and I must say, the results look promising.

The first thing you will notice is the translation of this game is a bit cruder compared to my previous works. That's because, I really didn't like this game. Still, I tested for a while and didn't face any problems. If you come across any bugs, untranslated sections or awkward translations, please let me know with a screenshot.

You can download the game .

-> Updated: 14/11/2024
 
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Komdot

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Hi! I'm currently experimenting with a new translation tool and decided to try it out on this game.
The tool uses a local AI model for translation, and I must say, the results look promising.

The first thing you will notice is the translation of this game is a bit cruder compared to my previous works. That's because, I really didn't like this game. Still, I tested for a while and didn't face any problems. If you come across any bugs, untranslated sections or awkward translations, please let me know with a screenshot.

You can download the game here.
I'm planning to replay, I'll review this tl.
 

cdvz23

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Hi! I'm currently experimenting with a new translation tool and decided to try it out on this game.
The tool uses a local AI model for translation, and I must say, the results look promising.

The first thing you will notice is the translation of this game is a bit cruder compared to my previous works. That's because, I really didn't like this game. Still, I tested for a while and didn't face any problems. If you come across any bugs, untranslated sections or awkward translations, please let me know with a screenshot.

You can download the game here.
Played your version for like 5 minutes and comparing it to the one in the OP is like comparing night and day. Will let you know if I stumble onto some bugs/untranslated portions but very nice to have people dedicated to work on stuff and making them more presentable. Suzuya is my favorite and deserves the extra care imo.
 

InstaPrincess

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Hi! I'm currently experimenting with a new translation tool and decided to try it out on this game.
The tool uses a local AI model for translation, and I must say, the results look promising.

The first thing you will notice is the translation of this game is a bit cruder compared to my previous works. That's because, I really didn't like this game. Still, I tested for a while and didn't face any problems. If you come across any bugs, untranslated sections or awkward translations, please let me know with a screenshot.

You can download the game here.
So far so good. I love your translation! The only (mild) issue I found so far is pronouns. At the royal ruins right after the prison scene at the start, Lawrence refers to Aisha as "it" for example. Better than "him" though, I guess.
 
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