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Please don't turn make the mc into a worthless sissy to satisfy a kink, girls domming the other girls is enough. People are just going to want to go further and further. femdom? they start asking for pegging. ntr? they want all the li to fuck everything and everyone except the mc. Be upfront about the future content and set some ground rules about how far it will go.
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Initial thoughts:
Congratulations on making your first game. It's really awesome that you've put the work in to do that and none of the following criticism should take away from that.
I got the error on launch but after ignoring it launched fine the second time.
Lots of spelling and grammar errors but the dialogue is understandable.
The animations are not very good. The first spanking scene and the nurse handjob are very jerky. The footjob is a little better but MC's skin is a strange red color.
The gameplay doesn't make sense. If I'm told that the first thing I have to do is get a health checkup (but not what time it's at) and I (after skipping time several times because there's nothing else you can do as soon as you get control
) go to see the nurse and she says she's busy but, yes, my appointment is super important. And then I keep waiting and going back and I don't have any dialogue options and nothing is happening. That makes me think the game is broken or I've hit the end of content, not "oh, I guess I should perv on some lady in the shower and find a naked woman in the mess hall and THEN the nurse will not be busy".
You have an interesting idea for a story. The things I complained about above are "bad sandbox" issues that could be fixed by making it a visual novel and focusing on telling your story rather than trying to make the world feel busy or suggest what the player is supposed to be doing without having to use an in-game walkthrough for every step.
Congratulations on making your first game. It's really awesome that you've put the work in to do that and none of the following criticism should take away from that.
I got the error on launch but after ignoring it launched fine the second time.
Lots of spelling and grammar errors but the dialogue is understandable.
The animations are not very good. The first spanking scene and the nurse handjob are very jerky. The footjob is a little better but MC's skin is a strange red color.
The gameplay doesn't make sense. If I'm told that the first thing I have to do is get a health checkup (but not what time it's at) and I (after skipping time several times because there's nothing else you can do as soon as you get control
) go to see the nurse and she says she's busy but, yes, my appointment is super important. And then I keep waiting and going back and I don't have any dialogue options and nothing is happening. That makes me think the game is broken or I've hit the end of content, not "oh, I guess I should perv on some lady in the shower and find a naked woman in the mess hall and THEN the nurse will not be busy". You have an interesting idea for a story. The things I complained about above are "bad sandbox" issues that could be fixed by making it a visual novel and focusing on telling your story rather than trying to make the world feel busy or suggest what the player is supposed to be doing without having to use an in-game walkthrough for every step.
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I won't be doing incest but if someone wants to patch it...
I think I need to do a brief intro that goes over how the game works. I'll probably change the memo label to quest as that's where the quests are.Initial thoughts:
Congratulations on making your first game. It's really awesome that you've put the work in to do that and none of the following criticism should take away from that.
I got the error on launch but after ignoring it launched fine the second time.
Lots of spelling and grammar errors but the dialogue is understandable.
The animations are not very good. The first spanking scene and the nurse handjob are very jerky. The footjob is a little better but MC's skin is a strange red color.
The gameplay doesn't make sense. If I'm told that the first thing I have to do is get a health checkup (but not what time it's at) and I (after skipping time several times because there's nothing else you can do as soon as you get control
You have an interesting idea for a story. The things I complained about above are "bad sandbox" issues that could be fixed by making it a visual novel and focusing on telling your story rather than trying to make the world feel busy or suggest what the player is supposed to be doing without having to use an in-game walkthrough for every step.
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Thanks, I appreciate the kind words. I didn't know there were any similar stories. I have a whole story mapped out it's just getting there that will be all the fun.
Oh, I absolutely have plans for a bigger girl on there. Just to see the cheeks wobble when she's spanked and having sex haha. Plus the pigtail hair style is something I have been looking at. Need the money to buy a decent one lol
Which model is that btw? I'll be looking at a different face but it could be a good starting point.
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The stacktrace I had was because the dialog box was referencing a font that wasn't included in the download. The gui/font/ directory doesn't exist so Renpy couldn't find the Hyperlegible font. To get past it, I changed the reference the standard DejavuSans.ttf. It might not be pretty but at least the game started for me.
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I have added the fonts folder to the updated release so I hope this fixes the issue for you.
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I'll be honest with you,.I like both and really what I'm making is a game I'd enjoy so both will be in. I'm looking at ways of making it so people can skip bits. I'm very inexperienced with all this so I'll do my best.
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if you plan do add such content in your game you may need to make it clear if it will be skippable- player can skip the scene but it still happens-, or avoidable -player can avoid it, stop it, never happens.
usually, although it adds work hours to the dev, some games offer alternative scenes when people avoid said scenes they dont want. for example the li wants to spank the mc, players get the option to have the mc accept and they get the spanking scene, or reject it and the dialogue and scene are different.
as long as said scenes are avoidable (and not skippable), you are golden.
best of health