Ren'Py The Stowaway [0.01] [Dazzling Media]

[blapper21]

I believe I have learned a lot from since I did the first release, so I may quickly remaster that part of the game. Fix the spellings and the bugs (that have recently been found) so I appreciate the feedback and plan to make the game better for everyone.

 

[Deleted member 7946941]

I'm not sure at the minute, probably slightly but not entirely.

It's no problem for me, because I'm not into harem but I play harem games too if I can go to solo route.

 

[blapper21]

It's no problem for me, because I'm not into haren but I play harem games too if I can go to solo route.

As I get more advanced, I plan to include more options

 

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[tremere87]

looks at the 5 billion femdom bdsm games and the half a dozen maledom ones on this site

hmm yes definitely there's just too much maledom isn't there

Old reaction I know, but I am a lover of facts. There are currently around 500 games more with maledom in comparison to femdom.

Less factual but also to take into account:
Ofcourse there also games with the tags barely deserving it. Like femdom is actually lezdom. Or femdom wich turns to maledom because mc turns the table.

 

[Daktyl33]

spit out an error in the shower

 

[blapper21]

spit out an error in the shower

Thanks

 

[phdusa1]

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[Merlin-Magic]

Would people suggest redoing the game from the beginning or continue as is and flesh out the story more?

Merlin-Magic what issues are you having moving between rooms?

It was not moving through rooms at all that was a problem. In fact that part works very well. The problem I have is that the notes (note pad button) says that an event with a character is supposed to happen at a certain time at a certain place but it is difficult to get the event to trigger like you expect. All the events triggered eventually but it seemed to almost be accidental and not logical. I hope this is clear.

 

[Bacher]

when the sandbox gameplay begins there is nothing that happens, iv tried waiting in the rooms and sleep but gave up after a few mins because i can't normally stand these kind of sandbox games

 

[Talim5215]

Best pic of the game so far.... Loving the look of the Mommy Milkers here, will give this game a try

 

[botc76]

Great how the only two reviews read in no way as if the game is yet deserving of the four stars they gave it. I get trying to be nice to a new dev, but what about people trying it expecting a 4-star game and then being disappointed?
Don't you think that will reflect negatively on the game?

 

[blapper21]

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How do I add this to my cover so it looks decent? I.E with the correct link text.

 

[phdusa1]

How do I add this to my cover so it looks decent? I.E with the correct link text.

Do you mean links to android port in original post?
1. You can put Android port and link it to my post.
2. Or you can copy the links of hosts like pixeldrain and link them directly in OP.

If you're asking how to color them:
You have to color the text "Pixeldrain" first "Pixeldrain" and then add links to it "Pixeldrain"

 

[fsatti2000]

Old reaction I know, but I am a lover of facts. There are currently around 500 games more with maledom in comparison to femdom.

Less factual but also to take into account:
Ofcourse there also games with the tags barely deserving it. Like femdom is actually lezdom. Or femdom wich turns to maledom because mc turns the table.

And this is easy to check by simply looking at the tags... about 73 pages worth of FemDom games and 88 pages of maledom games. With about 30 games per page. Lots of those games games are "both" but have maybe one or two scenes with a foot kiss, lots of NTR where the male is the primary dominant.

So I'd say you're pretty spot on.

 

[blapper21]

Android?

Hi, there is an Android port available now.

 

[Element Zero]

I dont write reviews, since im not a native english speaker, just ignore the misspelled stuff
This is just my oppinion and everyone can disagree with it.
1. The animations play very quickly, you might want to half the speed or even a litte less, make it look natural if possible. Im talking about the speed the movment is obvios a little strage but for a first try very good.
2. You have many words that repeat over multiple dialoges. I mean the foodjob, i cant count how often the nurse sayes satisfying conclution in this part of the game.
3. if your clock on top is in 24h time it would be cool to have the tooltips also in 24h or the otherway around both in 12h format.

For the future i hope your not to much into grinding machanic, where you just need to go to place A to get a stat that needs to be done 40 times just to continue a scene. Could you also put times in all the quests? Its not hard to remember when your suppost to be at a place but if an update takes 4 months its hard to remember at what time scenes are suppos to trigger.
Mabbe put an end of contet screen at the end of an update so we know, what we have seen all the content for an update.

In conclution i would say its a very good start.

 

[blapper21]

I dont write reviews, since im not a native english speaker, just ignore the misspelled stuff
This is just my oppinion and everyone can disagree with it.
1. The animations play very quickly, you might want to half the speed or even a litte less, make it look natural if possible. Im talking about the speed the movment is obvios a little strage but for a first try very good.
2. You have many words that repeat over multiple dialoges. I mean the foodjob, i cant count how often the nurse sayes satisfying conclution in this part of the game.
3. if your clock on top is in 24h time it would be cool to have the tooltips also in 24h or the otherway around both in 12h format.

For the future i hope your not to much into grinding machanic, where you just need to go to place A to get a stat that needs to be done 40 times just to continue a scene. Could you also put times in all the quests? Its not hard to remember when your suppost to be at a place but if an update takes 4 months its hard to remember at what time scenes are suppos to trigger.
Mabbe put an end of contet screen at the end of an update so we know, what we have seen all the content for an update.

In conclution i would say its a very good start.

Hi mate, no worries at all on your English, I understand everything You are saying.

I plan to redo the earlier animations as I have got better with Ren'py and Daz I have found a better way to do them as you can see in the second half of the game. But thank you, I appreciate the kind words, its been tough but I expected the renders to be the hardest bit.

The dialogue and writing is now being reviewed by a very helpful person on here so I will be rereleasing it with much better dialogue ASAP.

I'm not into grinding myself and I am actually thinking of removing the stats stuff or incorporating it but in a subtle way.

Anyway thanks for the review and feedback

 

[curiouslycruising]

Informal review for the start of the project (Beta-0.01)

Opening text and introduction are too overdone, tone down the 'like it's being voiced-over by David Attenborough'. Character motivations and monologue at the start feels all over the place.

Animations need some work to not be so choppy, but I think Dev knows that already.

If a system isn't implemented yet, don't have it appear on the screen. (Smartphone, Inventory, and so on). It just clutters things.

There is a small delay between us clicking the 'skip time' button, and character portraits appearing for interactions. Makes hitting the 'timed interactions' problematic.

 

[Canto Forte]

Starting from the beginning ... there appears to be somehting missing.

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