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Well, is bussy, not pussy
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Thank you. Yes, I just saw it and got confused when I put the name. It will be corrected for the next update.
A nice, tight boy-pussy tomorrow? Sounds like a plan to me.Well, is bussy, not pussy
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The game is now available on Itch.io.
Come here, bad girl. (Img not edited yet)
Come here, bad girl. (Img not edited yet)
It was at this point, I knew the game wasn't for me.
Not judging anyone who likes this, it's just not for me. I wish the dev well.
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Not judging anyone who likes this, it's just not for me. I wish the dev well.
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The Dev needs to go back and fix the grammar errors in the next update. I kept seeing him and his when talking about females and she and her when talking about men. Sometimes it's easy to figure out what they are saying but it gets aggravating to cypher it.
This has great potential but please stick to present tense in VNs. I want to immerse myself in the MC, and past tense feels like I'm reading something that happened to someone else. It works in books, not in VNs.
A lot of descriptive text is also unnecessary. Lines like "she said, smiling:" are already communicated through the images. The Visual Novel is a visual medium, don't forget that.
A lot of descriptive text is also unnecessary. Lines like "she said, smiling:" are already communicated through the images. The Visual Novel is a visual medium, don't forget that.
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The Sunset Fairies [v0.03] [Ethan Krautz]
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Interested but I'll play once I know if the dev is planning on doing a bunch of anal prolapse shit in this game too.
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i don't get the misuse of him and her .. when a female asks it depends on present or past tense ... like Emma asking a question in the past and you remembering it should be referred as " I remember her asking that " not " I remember him asking that "
see screenshot...
oh one other thing ... especially important ... when your carrying a weapon like a rifle or machine gun ... other's stay off to the side of you .. or mostly behind you .. not infront of you like you have Emma walking ... i realize this is just a game .. but if they get attacked to quickly and you fire off several rounds .. Emma's most likely a dead babe .... wouldn't wanna see that
see screenshot...
oh one other thing ... especially important ... when your carrying a weapon like a rifle or machine gun ... other's stay off to the side of you .. or mostly behind you .. not infront of you like you have Emma walking ... i realize this is just a game .. but if they get attacked to quickly and you fire off several rounds .. Emma's most likely a dead babe .... wouldn't wanna see that
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I don't think he's going to do it, but you never know. If he does, I'll write his name here in the death note.
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