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Eerie Entity

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Another game in which the main love interest is absolutely no way can be a virgin, because OH, GOD SHE IS 18 YEARS OLD!!!!! What happened to her this time? Did she fall in love with a teacher and fucked with him? Or maybe her first time was with a Chad in the backseat of his pickup? Or maybe she went to a competition with the high school football team and drunk too much? Oh no, I know, she likes to go to clubs and swallow interesting pills that make you want to go to the bathroom with someone else, yeah?
What's with this obsession with virgins? Is it so that you can boast about being her first? Well, congrats I guess, but the experience as a whole more than likely wasn't all that pleasant, rarely is for the girl, certainly no fireworks.
And in this day and age it's pretty much a norm that people would have explored their sexuality and have had sex well before they reach adulthood, we don't live in times anymore where a girl was expected to be a virgin until her wedding night.
 

fishbrain

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Another game in which the main love interest is absolutely no way can be a virgin, because OH, GOD SHE IS 18 YEARS OLD!!!!! What happened to her this time? Did she fall in love with a teacher and fucked with him? Or maybe her first time was with a Chad in the backseat of his pickup? Or maybe she went to a competition with the high school football team and drunk too much? Oh no, I know, she likes to go to clubs and swallow interesting pills that make you want to go to the bathroom with someone else, yeah?
Bro, why do you do this to yourself? I dislike NTR/sharing/swinging as much as anyone but you're just looking for purity which I can understand but you gotta be realistic in your expectations. If you find something that bothers you enough not to play it then just move on to something you do like and focus on that. Spending so much time complaining about things you can easily avoid, why? All you're doing is making yourself miserable.
 

UncleFredo

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Certainly an interesting beginning. It doesn't really grab me like the opening of Haley's Story. The whole sobriety struggle feels a little forced, and seems an impediment to connecting with the MC. Unlike Haley's story where she was the immediate focus of the MC's narrative about their mutual history, Belle "the brat" seems almost an after thought. Sure she's the topic of Elena's ongoing complaints, but most of the time Belle isn't present to interact with the MC. When she is present, she doesn't interact with the MC. Consider her singular focus on her cell phone at lunch to the exclusion of conversing with the MC.

The MC spends most of his time around Belle passively watching her bait Elena. Belle, so far, seems never to be front and center as the focus of the action. Despite the MC's introspection about Belle's behavior, I end up feeling detached from the character who is apparently the main focus of the story.

Perhaps due to his struggle with sobriety, there also seems to only a weak connection between the MC and Elena. This weakens my connection with the other characters in the story.

Established adults do not interact like 20 something twins, and the writing reflects the kind of conversations appropriate for people sharing a somewhat peripheral relationship like Elena and the MC. As a result the writing, while believable, doesn't draw us in.

Enough early observations. This VN is technically excellent and well written. I'm excited that Viti has a new game out and look forward to seeing how it evolves.
 

JETracktor

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Despite few orthographic mistakes the work done pretty nice. It's not a dick sketch for sure :KEK:
Looking forward for this story.
 

Once_Up

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I hope the dev will not throw away the last part of the game like they do with Haley's story, damn I love that game so much but I'm so disappointed with the last part and rushed ending.
 
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You can change the MC's name to anything you want. The default is Dan. but if you like Carrot Top, go for it! :)

EDIT: Oh by the way, the MC is NOT in that render.
Yeah, others have pointed out he's not the MC. For a second, I was looking forward to masturbating an LI with oversized finger before fucking her while wearing dumbo ears and holding a plastic baby. My disappointment is bottomless.
 

ZagorTeNay

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Another game in which the main love interest is absolutely no way can be a virgin, because OH, GOD SHE IS 18 YEARS OLD!!!!! What happened to her this time? Did she fall in love with a teacher and fucked with him? Or maybe her first time was with a Chad in the backseat of his pickup? Or maybe she went to a competition with the high school football team and drunk too much? Oh no, I know, she likes to go to clubs and swallow interesting pills that make you want to go to the bathroom with someone else, yeah?
Funny thing is, by the time you find a virgin girl willing to have sex with you, you'll be so old you won't be able to get it up anyway. :LOL:
 

Once_Up

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Funny thing is, by the time you find a virgin girl willing to have sex with you, you'll be so old you won't be able to get it up anyway. :LOL:
The obsession with virginity in porn games is one thing I hate about myself, I don't know why it matters so much for me, somehow it's just a subconscious thing that I can't control lol
 
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Irgendwie Irgendwo

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Okay, so we're playing an alcoholic-recovering Ron Perlman as painter this time. Setting up the premise covers 4 days instead of the usual two. No nudity yet, unless sketched on canvas. Looking forward to where this will be going, and if there are more love interests than the obvious two. I'd say it's a positive that we're playing an older guy and that the main LI isn't the classic dumb milf.
 
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fishbrain

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Better to die a virgin than live life as a miserable, pathetic cuck, like a scavenger, eating the remains after the dinner of the more successful males.
I was just offering some friendly advice, but your perspective on this screams insecure. Anyway I found the ignore button so bye bye and good luck in your future endeavors, may you spend your remaining days swimming in a sea of virgins!!
 

SeveredRealms

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Funny thing is, by the time you find a virgin girl willing to have sex with you, you'll be so old you won't be able to get it up anyway. :LOL:
hahahahahah Especially if he was in the town I grew up in..... I would feel bad for him following in my footprints of being there first......
 
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