- Thread starter aikiriu
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- Oct 1, 2019
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As Mr. Disturbed would say:
"GET UP, COME ON GET DOWN WITH THE THICKNESS"
Or something like that.
"GET UP, COME ON GET DOWN WITH THE THICKNESS"
Or something like that.
- Jan 13, 2020
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I said this in my review, but I want to say it here too...
To who ever wrote this, don't know if it's the dev or if they have a writer, two things. Firstly, slow the fuck down. This doesn't feel like a story, but instead a bunch of plot points thrown together in a linear way. And secondly, please get over your allergy to exposition. You literally tell MC and the reader nothing about what is going on. And then you even make fun of it. That does not make for a good story, like at all. It again leads back into this feeling like a bunch of plot points thrown at a wall.
The other thing is what is up with the white text? It would be fine if the text box wasn't practically non-existent. But then with half of the background being a similar color it makes it very hard to read. Hell sometimes I couldn't even read words because the just blended into the background.
I made a few other points in my review too, but I think these were some of the major ones that I wanted to make sure got seen.
To who ever wrote this, don't know if it's the dev or if they have a writer, two things. Firstly, slow the fuck down. This doesn't feel like a story, but instead a bunch of plot points thrown together in a linear way. And secondly, please get over your allergy to exposition. You literally tell MC and the reader nothing about what is going on. And then you even make fun of it. That does not make for a good story, like at all. It again leads back into this feeling like a bunch of plot points thrown at a wall.
The other thing is what is up with the white text? It would be fine if the text box wasn't practically non-existent. But then with half of the background being a similar color it makes it very hard to read. Hell sometimes I couldn't even read words because the just blended into the background.
I made a few other points in my review too, but I think these were some of the major ones that I wanted to make sure got seen.
- May 1, 2020
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Might be your browser (or internet provider). I'm getting 1.2~1.8MB/sec download from nopy using Firefox as my browser.
- Apr 19, 2019
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Strange. Mega and Upload are both downloading at full speed for me. Nopy was until last week. Though Nopy also claims I've downloaded 15 gigs of data from them, when I've only started a download, seen the crappy speed, and instantly stopped it. So I've downloaded less than a gig from them despite the claim.
- Oct 26, 2017
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except for the part that the girls in this game have one meter of dick
otherwise, all right, nice big assesand renders
otherwise, all right, nice big assesand renders
- Jan 24, 2018
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- May 1, 2020
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That's what the outlets look like for parts of Europe, Russia, South America and Asia.
- Jan 24, 2018
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- Jan 24, 2018
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Far as I can tell the MC in this game is basically a demi-goddess at this point and yet she's getting bossed around by normal Humans I find that irritating. lol
- Jul 30, 2017
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Thing is... English is my 3rd language. I just started messing around in daz when I decided to, why not, make a game for fun. My storytelling skills are beyond shit, but I'm trying to improve.
- Jul 30, 2017
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I had a complaint that the text box was really annoying so I made it 90% transparent.
Too much?