HTML Abandoned The Time Traveller [v0.25] [justAbro]

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Overview:
The main plot of this choose your own adventure game/visual novel focuses on time travel. In "The Time Traveller", your character will be able to travel to the past and experience different stories based on the choices you make. The choices you make may be dangerous for your character, so be careful. Will you try your best to remain pure? Will you give everything in order to stay alive? Will you surrender to your newly found internal desires? Its all up to you, and the choices you make.​

Thread Updated: 2022-07-14
Release Date: 2022-06-09
Developer: justabro
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Censored: No
Version: 0.25
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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Neat, something that I would request at this early stage is better formatting of large blocks to text i.e. extra line breaks between paragraphs, perhaps even "tabbing in" the first line of the paragraph.

But damn I am impressed with the amount here for a 0.1! I will be keeping an eye on this one
 
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More content than I was expecting for a .1 html. Writing better than the average as well.

Not a complaint, just an observation, but the real porn kind of kills the medieval era vibe.
 
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I have a few suggestions for you if you'd like them.

1) If you haven't already, contact the admins here and get the developer tag.
2) If you haven't, join the Twine discord. They are VERY helpful there and super nice.
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3) I got two important pieces of advice from other Twine devs and I'll pass them on to you. First, try not to make players scroll very much. Something about a bunch of text on a page tends to make people lose interest and just skim. Secondly, try to make your links consistent in how they work. If it's a conversation, maybe make them part of the conversation otherwise it's best to make them actions. My own game is going this route fully in the 0.23 release.
 
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4.10 star(s) 9 Votes