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Deflect much?
And MY whole point is that the "vaginal sex" tag was already there.It's not a deflection it's a genuine question so I can respond, because from what I understand is that you missed a sentence in my post...
this bit specifically..." cause I didn't see it in the tags, since it's my first time playing the game and sometimes they just sneak it in there. "
So what point were you trying to make again?
... You started this conversation on some weird footing. Still, fair enough, the comment about the vaginal sex was in reference to the fact that people were complaining about content and the story still being limited to Oral sex.And MY whole point is that the "vaginal sex" tag was already there.
Annnnnd this discussion is closed.
Probably stay in the dark forever because i'm too busy chasing pussy.You'll learn that there's a mystery evolving around your family name.
Will you uncover the truth or will you stay in the dark forever?
That's exactly the big problem here, we have absolutely no f*cking idea of what's going on behind the scene. See below for more details.Can someone recap what the aunt did or didn't do or what she had a part in and what the parents did and everything around that situation?
I couldn't agree more! Me, as a reader, got really upset during the scene in chapter 17 where MC and (aunt) Megan are FINALLY talking about the BIG secret thingy MC's parents & aunt were/are involved in. It suddenly goes behind the scene like this: "MC says everything he knows to Megan" and WE, as readers, learn nothing at all except from the confirmation that she is actually involved in this BIG secret thingy. And what upset me even more is that after the scene, they act like nothing ever happened, MC and his dear aunty Megan are right back at their flirting ritual, all is forgiven, all is forgotten, all is perfectly ok between the two of them, life is full of love, rainbows and unicorns after all. I mean WTF? Megan is somehow involved in something big that put her life, her nephew's life and her daughters' lives in danger (that's the whole point of the trip to this island remember) and the scene simply ends wih the MC casually saying to Megan: "one day you'll have to tell me the full story". Huh? That's it? Really dev?The whole game is written in a way that the player knows everything the MC knows, down to thoughts and feelings. But then, just because the author is desperate to induce suspense, when the MC finally discovers the big fat secret he has been looking for the whole game, it is hidden from the player. After that it goes right back to the player basically knowing the MCs every thought, including his thoughts about the secret without ever explicitely thinking of the secret... Very cheap trick, and one you are taught to avoid in one of the first lessons of every creative writing class. Mostly because it tends to annoy the reader and implicates the authors assuption that the readers are idiots.
That's exactly the big problem here, we have absolutely no f*cking idea of what's going on behind the scene. See below for more details.
I couldn't agree more! Me, as a reader, got really upset during the scene in chapter 17 where MC and (aunt) Megan are FINALLY talking about the BIG secret thingy MC's parents & aunt were/are involved in. It suddenly goes behind the scene like this: "MC says everything he knows to Megan" and WE, as readers, learn nothing at all except from the confirmation that she is actually involved in this BIG secret thingy. And what upset me even more is that after the scene, they act like nothing ever happened, MC and his dear aunty Megan are right back at their flirting ritual, all is forgiven, all is forgotten, all is perfectly ok between the two of them, life is full of love, rainbows and unicorns after all. I mean WTF? Megan is somehow involved in something big that put her life, her nephew's life and her daughters' lives in danger (that's the whole point of the trip to this island remember) and the scene simply ends wih the MC casually saying to Megan: "one day you'll have to tell me the full story". Huh? That's it? Really dev?
Something else is bothering me. We now know that Bella knew from the very beginning about her mother's shady businesses and was acting dumb each time the MC was revealing something to her. So why did she ask him to take photos of her mother's confidential documents then? It was very risky for both of them and does not really match with the fact that she's also somehow involved in her mother's businesses...
How does 24824277 translate to BITCHASS?
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