VN Ren'Py The Way of the Champion [Ch. 2] [KotStorm]

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PopPop63

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Jun 16, 2020
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She's Is in fact a contraction for she is , BUT you us it wrong. You never would say If she's , ill ask her to run with me. you would use she is in that type of sentence. contraction use and the improper use of neither/either are 2 of my pet peeves in any written media.
 

TigerWolfe

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Oct 19, 2022
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Seems like a standard slice of life game, I'm curious to discover more about the alluded to problems in the past. The, I'm assuming, LIs don't really rock my world, but there's nothing wrong with any of them. Hair seems oddly frizzy on everyone, not sure if that's a dev choice or rendering challenge.

Biggest issue is that it desperately needs an American English proofreader as it's set in the US and all but possibly one character seem to be citizens, rather than foreign students.
 
3.30 star(s) 4 Votes