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A few things:
The grammar is really terrible, but that could eabe fixed with a proofreader.
The walking animations are going to live in my nightmares for quite a while, but it doesn't ruin the game in any way IMO.
The MC's anger issues(at least in the start) should probably get toned down a bit, as he acts like a 7 year old throwing a tantrum, because he wasn't allowed any candy.
The biggest problem for me is the grammar, as i have a hard time making out any sentences, because they are so incomprehensible.
The grammar is really terrible, but that could eabe fixed with a proofreader.
The walking animations are going to live in my nightmares for quite a while, but it doesn't ruin the game in any way IMO.
The MC's anger issues(at least in the start) should probably get toned down a bit, as he acts like a 7 year old throwing a tantrum, because he wasn't allowed any candy.
The biggest problem for me is the grammar, as i have a hard time making out any sentences, because they are so incomprehensible.
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Thank you for your feedback. I'm already working on those walking animations(Fixed one of them.). MC's mood instability is because of his despair.
Right now, I can't afford to hire a proofreader (I really appreciate if someone can help me for now for a free.), I assume main problem is the way I tried to describe things, like when MC was sitting by the pool, Am I right?
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Yes, both when you're describing different things, but you also sometimes put the words in the wrong order. An example: "Alarm isn't ringing, probably i woke up earlier than usual" when it should've been "Alarm isn't ringing, i probably woke up earlier than usual"
For me the most important thing in a VN, is the story and the narration of the story. So i probably care a little more about the grammar than others.
I wish you the best of luck with your project.
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The Way of the Champion [Ch. 1] Unofficial Android Port + IC Patch
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it has potential .....
the story isnt bad so far... i like the choice of soccer (football) too
moreover im a sucker for a good sister/mc Incest story and i hope the sister will the monogamous/single path choice that dev was talking about at earlier comments.
but the visuals and mostly the animations need some work , especially when the characters walking.
the story isnt bad so far... i like the choice of soccer (football) too
moreover im a sucker for a good sister/mc Incest story and i hope the sister will the monogamous/single path choice that dev was talking about at earlier comments.
but the visuals and mostly the animations need some work , especially when the characters walking.
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"Life is hard, isn't it? You may experience events that destroy your joy of life.
In such cases, it is necessary to continue, even if it is difficult.
Some find this power in making more money, while others live for reputation and fame.
But your situation is different. You do not continue to live for money or fame like others; you live just tokeep your promises fuck your family... "
Fixed it
In such cases, it is necessary to continue, even if it is difficult.
Some find this power in making more money, while others live for reputation and fame.
But your situation is different. You do not continue to live for money or fame like others; you live just to
Fixed it
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Hi KotStorm,
I was wondering if you could include a feature to remove (totally hide) the quick menu from the screen (It's not needed for computer users...we can right click to bring up the menu items)? I tried to adjust your script to accommodate my custom textbox, but as the image below shows...the quick menu creates an open space at the bottom.
And normally I create an Adjustment mod which adds a custom textbox and includes a few other mods which together improves the dialog text without blocking screen content.
I've also included the custom textbox used in this image, incase you wanted to include it in a future release.
Regards
I was wondering if you could include a feature to remove (totally hide) the quick menu from the screen (It's not needed for computer users...we can right click to bring up the menu items)? I tried to adjust your script to accommodate my custom textbox, but as the image below shows...the quick menu creates an open space at the bottom.
And normally I create an Adjustment mod which adds a custom textbox and includes a few other mods which together improves the dialog text without blocking screen content.
I've also included the custom textbox used in this image, incase you wanted to include it in a future release.
Regards
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I've tested your textbox and it works fine for me, there isn't any space at the bottom. Can you resize your textbox to 2000x300 and try again? If the issue still persists, I'll look into it.
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Unofficial Android Port of:
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Might just be me but both women looked better with their previous haircuts, especially Zoe, not to say they look ugly or anything just my opinion.
Also kind of refreshing to see more "realistic" body types from time to time.
Also kind of refreshing to see more "realistic" body types from time to time.
Think your archive is corrupted. Tried multiple mirrors and everytime on extraction, the images.rpa file comes back with a data error.
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