Thanks you for the suggestion and help, currently not yet found any native or proficient english proofreader myself, so i only rely on dictionary and sometimes internet translator, I appreciate any help
it is crunched with Renpy Cruncher that basically cut 95% of Image size,heck the cruncher is developed by a member of this forum and have its own thread, the true size of the game without being crunched is around 1.3 gigs lol (blame it to unoptimized PNG size)
also yeah, people maybe think it is too short for ver 0.5 compared to others game,as i'm only doing 3-5 minutes content every version of the game,as it is certainly attract better attention to write it as ver 0.5 rather than ver 0.1.5