VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Web We Weave [v0.9] [Balladiasm]

[Esti]

more drama-oriented

You need a better writing for it. Right now it's not a suspensful drama you picture in your head, but a rushed script for porn movie, only almost devoid of actual porn. Animations are short and weak, writing is lazy, characters are bleak and dull, MC is pathetic... One of the worst games I played, really, and without any sign of promise as well. Waste of time.

 

[Fzoner95]

Well that was a short update.

Also: Even with the incest patch there is a "stepmom" in the last image if you chose the path Darkness -> Gun

 

[TheDisgracedOne]

Amazing at last a good Femdom game , we need more of that with the "landlady" character , i often don't like non-Daz games because other renderings options are not that good , but here the situations and the story make it for that.

 

[DarkSithLord47]

no possibility of changing your name at the start of the game,story looks interesting at first but as you continue playing you realise its all over the place,unavoidable ntr,no real choices,no real sex scenes, you constantly get kicked in the balls..fuck this shit i'm out

 

[Simon66666]

English is so bad, even worse than mine story is meaningless renders are worst Definitely In my ignore list sorry but you need to work more than this you can't give to player choices that's doesn't affect the story with this you loosing fans and possibly patrons change your mind before starting to work for nobody with this project of you

 

[Azaliel]

Coouldn't get into it with a female being Dominant over me. Wish there were another path that avoided that. I prefer to be the Dominant one.

 

[Belnick]

Coouldn't get into it with a female being Dominant over me. Wish there were another path that avoided that. I prefer to be the Dominant one.

it is way beyond female dom when she talk about castrate her son etc...

 

[maustin]

Game has a lot of potential but as others have said is letdown by poor writing and that the choices the player makes have no meaning. Absolutely hate the dominatrix and sissy elements that you cannot avoid. The English translation in this game is horrible. For those wanting better English fixed script files attached.

 

[maustin]

Amended script files change the following, on the corrupt path you go on date with Mom instead of the pet play scene. Sex scene with Dr. Lili changed from the hatef*uck scene that has Fem Dom and Submissive overtones that I hated to an actual sex scene. As I said earlier this game needs much better writing, plot direction.

 

[SandmansMisery]

WTF!! This game is confusing as fuck what the blue hell is going on?, Fuck it I dont care its going in the trash.

 

[Balladiasm]

hmm...I don't expect that the femdom backlash really strong,anyway,for the castration it's only a figure of speech, as it's not happening, and from onward, as we have divide the route now, you will not seeing any real femdom anymore aside used as figure of speech when you aren't in submissive route. Also for one who asked for dominant route, both corruption route and good guy route will be where the MC have dominant personalities. Sorry for many previous forced content as it's build up of story (MC still on Mind control influence)

WTF!! This game is confusing as fuck what the blue hell is going on?, Fuck it I dont care its going in the trash.

At least,thank you for trying the game, i know that there so much going on one place as build up, that then become confusing as fuck because its going out nowhere because my slow update,believe me,i'm trying to sort the thing up, i'm even ask this to my Patrons whether how they want me to sort the story in my previous discussion

 

[Master of Puppets]

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Since the submissive route seems to be all about you being spanked and stomped on, which doesn't at all appeal to me, and staying a good boy and not being corrupted sounds really boring, I'm only doing the dominant corrupt route. May I suggest a submissive route that doesn't involve being abused, and adding an option to let you resist in that older scene?

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One thing puzzles me, wasn't there supposed to be more with the sister in this update? It was a bit disappointing not to see that.

Balladiasm you should ask the staff for a 'Game Developer' badge. It's a good idea to announce public versions and things like polls on here too.

 

[rainy147]

To developer: For the question you asked in changelog, I prefer "similar but no difference" because it's too bothersome to repeat the game again and again to try all pathes. As long as the story is good and the pictures are awesome, the game can be very interesting even if there's only one path.

 

[zlka112]

Please stop this now. Do not update to say I did update. There 's nothing you give to your fans. If you have a dream, here is the opportunity. Either realize your dream or go away. Please go back to the main event and work and show us something tangible. "You can be a legend; you will be forgotten"

 

[BaasB]

Nothing New.......removed from my games list to play and Dev name to avoid in the near future

 

[PeggyBlackett]

There is nothing at all wrong with the Honey Select models if you dont like them then move on and dont pop in to spread hate. Now do i think the Daz models are better looking yes. But there is nothing wrong with the Honey Select ones. And some of my Favorite games from this site have them.

Tools are less important than what you do with them...

 

[Kpopn00dcoverlover]

Balladiasm

v0.6.5
1. There no change in previous roadmap plan, ver 0.7 will contain continuation of the built up of Office content, little sister content and implement it to the other route that doesn’t have the office and little sister content yet

2. As said in the ver 0.6.5 release note: I’m actually torn between using ‘different but similar’ approach for the route(which here mean regardless of path,there similar information and linearity in the stories the player received) and the ‘entirely different’ approach ( which mean the stories can be entirely different between the route)

3. There pros and cons for both approach, you know, the critiques I often get is: 1. The choice often doesn’t make differences, and 2. There too many happening in the stories at the same times. The former approach will get criticized as number 1, and the latter approach will get criticized as number 2.

if you're playing to critiques, you will never get your story out. you have a vision, so make it! the choice between the two should really be what works better for YOU. the same people who complain about choices not mattering ALSO complain when "their path" doesn't get updated. "real" choices means many branches and renders

for me the biggest disappointment was when given the choice to join or resist (i prefer join of course, its a porn game, but i did check both), and that didn't make any difference. style or actual. why even have the choice. i honestly haven't played this since then.

 

[RandomGuy99]

Bad game writing. No choice and you basically a victim...

 

[mpror]

Dev im guessing you're relatively new when it comes to making games? You have good elements and bad elements in this game, im not going to list em here since basically everyone else has alrdy done this for me but i will give u a pad on the back and tell you to not give up! You're listening to the feedback and are willing to grow and despite the negative comments, you remain positive and keep dishing out updates (they too need improving but im sure you're alrdy aware of this)

Anyway chin up, ill keep this on my to watch list and hope to see it improve

 

[Hercule_Poirot]

I think you lost me at : "Does you will able to save the day and marry your sweet girlfriend or does you lost everything in this fight?"