Ren'Py - Completed - The Wish [v1.0.1] [Midnite Guerilla]

Currently the content is enough to get you an idea as to what the premise of game is what you can expect in future updates. The landlady render is pretty accurate her age shows but at the same time she hot enough to keep you interested. Though I wish they make the whole thing a bit brighter(not talking about the skin tone but overall lighting in some place I feel needs to be more). I loved the idea of reading her journal entries to get the back story and understand her interest and make appropriate choices.
Now the thing that is definitely irritating is the navigation system, right now it’s very difficult to navigate fluidly as the buttons are two small and at the opposite side of the screen. Maybe make them big or atleast kind put them in centre that way we can navigate quickly.
Overlooking the navigation and my lighting nitpick the game is pretty good and you should definitely give it a try and maybe consider supporting(if you can that is).

Okay, game is finally playable now.
Content wise it is okay for a first version. You get an idea of the writing, the gameplay and the quality of the renders.

The landlady is hot, even if I wished her bush was a bit trimmed at least. She's heavy-set, her tits are a bit sagging, but she's still hella attractive. In one sentence, she is looking believable for her age, but also very, very fuckable.

Now, for some constructive criticism.
The navigation is tedious and annoying. To have to click so many times to get somewhere, especially when the buttons are soooo small is a hindrance. It's no fun, it's a chore.
Make the buttons bigger (at least the whole size of the word, not just a small clickable arrow before them), and maybe create one central hub from which you can get everywhere with just one click so that you need at the most two clicks to reach anywhere in the house.
Right now the game is not big, so you find the right solution to quests relatively easy, but in the future that might change and then some form of hint system you could use if you wanted to would be great.

Anyway, apart from the problems at start, this really wasn't bad.